Thanks Mark.
Paul via phone
> On Oct 29, 2017, at 8:18 PM, Mark C wrote:
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> Congrats, Paul! I actually read that article on line but didn't look at the
> by-line. I'll need to take a closer look in the future.
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> Stanley Halpin wrote:
>> Nice piece Paul.
>> I am quite a nitpicker myself bu
Congrats, Paul! I actually read that article on line but didn't look at
the by-line. I'll need to take a closer look in the future.
Stanley Halpin wrote:
Nice piece Paul.
I am quite a nitpicker myself but I do disagree with Igor’s stylistic comments;
I think it flows well as is.
However, one q
My sincere apology, Paul!
You are right: this is not the right venue for the literary discussion.
(After sending the message, I thought that I should have sent it off the
list, but it was too late.)
The reason I started asking you was that I was interested in your
professional opinion and wa
Bob W-PDML wrote:
I haven't read Paul's article, but I have read George Orwell's Politics and the
English Language, and one should always pay attention to his rule vi.
Does he also have a rule emacs?
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I too have read Orwell. Rule six is applicable to every communication, but many
of his other points remain valid as well. Clarity, brevity and active voice are
always better than pretentious language, padded prose and passive voice.
Paul via phone
> On Oct 28, 2017, at 1:18 PM, Bob W-PDML wrot
I haven't read Paul's article, but I have read George Orwell's Politics and the
English Language, and one should always pay attention to his rule vi.
> On 28 Oct 2017, at 17:11, Igor PDML-StR wrote:
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> Paul,
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> Thank you for the detailed response. I've learned some interesting things
Okay, we’re done with this. I post photos here to be critiqued, and I
appreciate comments both positive and negative. But I don’t post my work here .
Ann posted a link to this article, because she thought it was a topic of
concern. And I appreciate her doing so. But it wasn't posted for a critiq
Paul,
Thank you for the detailed response. I've learned some interesting things
about NYT's style.
My teachers/advisors (at all stages and levels) taught me that each
paragraph should contain one main thought/point. Then, if you were to
write down those main points, you get a reverse outli
Thanks Stan. The purpose of the legislation is regulation. Again, space didn’t
allow, but the text of the senate amendment requires NHTSA to develop a
requirement for a warning device.
> On Oct 28, 2017, at 11:31 AM, Stanley Halpin
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> Nice piece Paul.
> I am quite a nitpicker myse
Nice piece Paul.
I am quite a nitpicker myself but I do disagree with Igor’s stylistic comments;
I think it flows well as is.
However, one quibble I have is that you and the Auto Alliance people are
talking about two different things (legislation vs. regulation) and I wish you
could have highlig
Janette’s site is kidsandcars.org
Paul via phone
> On Oct 28, 2017, at 9:52 AM, Paul Stenquist wrote:
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> Thanks Dan, but Janette Fennell is the hero. She became involved in
> child/auto safety issues when her car was car jacked and she and her husband
> were locked in the trunk — not knowing
Thanks Dan, but Janette Fennell is the hero. She became involved in child/auto
safety issues when her car was car jacked and she and her husband were locked
in the trunk — not knowing what had become of her baby who had been in the
backseat. The infant was recovered and the Fennell’s freed, but
Our Hero!
Dan Matyola
http://www.pentaxphotogallery.com/danieljmatyola
On Sat, Oct 28, 2017 at 4:09 AM, jtainter wrote:
> Congratulations, Paul. Good job, and a good bit of public service.
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Thanks Joe!
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Congratulations, Paul. Good job, and a good bit of public service.
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Hi Igor,
The Auto Alliance point regarding how long it would take to equip the fleet is
self refuting in that they said the same thing six years ago. More importantly,
I get only 900 words, so I have to pick my battles.
In regard to the paragraph breaks, the first is debatable but a split deci
Interesting... I didn't know such a technology already exists. Nor I had
heard about the proposed regulation.
Did NYT fire all their editors?
I was a bit confused by a few things (of which most are what the editor
should have noticed, such as #2 and #3):
1. Paul, I was expecting that you w
It is hard to imagine that this happens.. but it does too often :-(
https://www.nytimes.com/2017/10/26/automobiles/wheels/forgetting-a-child-in-a-back-seat-can-kill-cars-may-soon-warn-you.html
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