27; method" is better
without "data" and possibly without "(Haystack)".
Your personal note is probably fine since you know what you meant when you
wrote it. As documentation for a general audience, I'd say it's badly written
and needs significant edits. You should totally self-publish it anyway.
Probably in a public repository so that interested people will help you improve
it.
--
Rocco Caputo
ring the reader to the copy that already exists is better than duplicating
that information.
Redundancy is tedious to read and hard to maintain.
Making the manual more readable for people who won't look things up isn't worth
that.
--
Rocco Caputo
