ID:               25559
 Updated by:       [EMAIL PROTECTED]
 Reported By:      collin at xs4all dot nl
-Status:           Open
+Status:           Closed
 Bug Type:         Documentation problem
 Operating System: n/a
 PHP Version:      Irrelevant
 New Comment:

This bug has been fixed in CVS.

In case this was a PHP problem, snapshots of the sources are packaged
every three hours; this change will be in the next snapshot. You can
grab the snapshot at http://snaps.php.net/.
 
In case this was a documentation problem, the fix will show up soon at
http://www.php.net/manual/.

In case this was a PHP.net website problem, the change will show
up on the PHP.net site and on the mirror sites in short time.
 
Thank you for the report, and for helping us make PHP better.

The Database Security section has been rewritten.


Previous Comments:
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[2003-09-16 10:54:09] collin at xs4all dot nl

Description:
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Hello excellent developers of the excellent PHP! Let me begin by
stating that normally I find the PHP documentation to be excellent, and
that any glitches are but ripples in an otherwise smooth experience.

Unfortunately, the documentation on "Database Security"
(http://www.php.net/manual/en/security.index.php) reads like it was
written by a learner of the English language. It apparently has not
been spell-checked (I take it 'connecion' is not an English word) and
some sentences are complete mysteries to me. For example, I have no
idea what the author means by 'In the more place you take the more
action to increase the protection of your database, the less
probability of that an attacker succeeds'.

May I suggest that a native speaker of English reads the document in
question and tries to rewrite the parts that need it in clear and
concise English?

I am not a native speaker of English myself, or I would send in patches
and/or suggestions myself.

Many thanks in advance.




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