[issue8218] Fix typos and phrasing in the Web servers howto

Ezio Melotti added the comment: Fixed in r79781 (trunk), r79782 (release26-maint), r79783 (py3k) and r79784 (release31-maint). Thanks to all! -- resolution: accepted -> fixed stage: patch review -> committed/rejected status: open -> closed ___ Pytho

[issue8218] Fix typos and phrasing in the Web servers howto

R. David Murray added the comment: I do know something about web development, so I did a more extensive edit. I'm not saying I've brought it completely up to date or fixed any inaccuracies, but I did change the tone here and there, tightened up a bunch of the language, clarified a few things

[issue8218] Fix typos and phrasing in the Web servers howto

Ezio Melotti added the comment: The author is Marek Kubica, but he doesn't seem to be registered to this tracker. -- ___ Python tracker ___ _

[issue8218] Fix typos and phrasing in the Web servers howto

Éric Araujo added the comment: Is there a main author for this fileN? If so, they can say whether they left the link as a reminder to put the image back later, or if they were just afraid of real version control <0.4 wink> -- ___ Python tracker

[issue8218] Fix typos and phrasing in the Web servers howto

Ezio Melotti added the comment: If the image is missing, then the whole line can be removed. -- ___ Python tracker ___ ___ Python-bugs

[issue8218] Fix typos and phrasing in the Web servers howto

Éric Araujo added the comment: This is a reST comment. -- ___ Python tracker ___ ___ Python-bugs-list mailing list Unsubscribe: http:

[issue8218] Fix typos and phrasing in the Web servers howto

Ezio Melotti added the comment: There's also an invalid link to an image just after the title "The low-level view": -.. .. image:: http.png +.. image:: http.png The image is not there though, and in r66294 only the document has been added. -- ___ P

[issue8218] Fix typos and phrasing in the Web servers howto

Aditya Bhargava added the comment: Another patch. This contains all the patches from Brian Curtin's issue8218_v3.diff patch along with more edits, including an -> in teh -> the wordspushedtogether spaced out unnecessary _a_ words _is_ taken out -- nosy: +abhargava Added file: http://bu

[issue8218] Fix typos and phrasing in the Web servers howto

Brian Curtin added the comment: My first patch removed a lot of the he/him/his wording, but now that you mentioned it found another one. Updated the patch. -- Added file: http://bugs.python.org/file16693/issue8218_v3.diff ___ Python tracker

[issue8218] Fix typos and phrasing in the Web servers howto

Changes by Brian Curtin : Removed file: http://bugs.python.org/file16692/issue8218_v2.diff ___ Python tracker ___ ___ Python-bugs-list mailing

[issue8218] Fix typos and phrasing in the Web servers howto

Éric Araujo added the comment: I noticed that “a user” is “he” in the current text; gender-neutral language may be more in conformity with the recent diversity statement. Regards -- ___ Python tracker ___

[issue8218] Fix typos and phrasing in the Web servers howto

Brian Curtin added the comment: I went through and made a lot of grammar corrections and rewording throughout the file. See attached patch. I have no idea if this doc is technically correct. I only made grammar changes since I'm not a big web developer, but it could probably use a look from

[issue8218] Fix typos and phrasing in the Web servers howto

Martin v. Löwis added the comment: It seems that a lot of non-native speakers (of English) are participating in this thread. By nature, this is something that native speakers should resolve. Unless I'm mistaken (and Ezio actually *does* speak English as a first language), I propose that one o

[issue8218] Fix typos and phrasing in the Web servers howto

R. David Murray added the comment: 'is' may be technically correct, however it will sound wrong to a native speaker's ear, at least in America. -- nosy: +r.david.murray ___ Python tracker _

[issue8218] Fix typos and phrasing in the Web servers howto

Éric Araujo added the comment: The rest of the patch seems good to me. Note that “the majority of users is” is as correct as “the majority of users are”, choosing one is a matter of preference. -- title: typo currect -> Fix typos and phrasing in the Web servers howto