Re: [sidr] WGLC: draft-ietf-sidr-bgpsec-ops - ENDS: 2016-06-14 (June 14 2016)

2016-06-16 Thread Matthias Waehlisch
Hi, I read v09. No objections only minor comments: line 102: BGPsec need*s* *to* be spoken only line 104: s/by small edge routers/by resource constrained edge routers/ line 119: *see* [RFC4271] line 159: s//etc./ lines 200-206 seem redudant to lines 208-213 line 202 s/smallish/resource

[sidr] draft-ietf-sidr-lta-use-cases-05.txt

2016-06-16 Thread Stephen Kent
I read the latest version of this document and have a few comments, some of which I have made before, to no avail ;-). I still find the wording of the three examples in Section 4 to be unnecessarily informal. I’ve provided suggested text for previous versions of this document that probably is