Re: [Softwires] Comments on draft-ietf-softwire-map-deployment-01

2013-07-15 Thread Roberta Maglione (robmgl)
: Sunday, July 14, 2013 9:19 PM To: Roberta Maglione (robmgl) Cc: Softwires Subject: Re: [Softwires] Comments on draft-ietf-softwire-map-deployment-01 Dear Roberta, The DS-Lite ATFR Name option defined in RFC 6334 is used to carry a fully qualified domain name of the AFTR not an IPv6 address. There was

Re: [Softwires] Comments on draft-ietf-softwire-map-deployment-01

2013-07-14 Thread Qiong
Hi Roberta, On Mon, Jul 15, 2013 at 7:40 AM, Roberta Maglione (robmgl) wrote: > > In addition even if you could, it would sound confusing in my opinion, > using a DS-Lite specific option to provision MAP specific parameters. > [Qiong] I agree with you. I think using DMR is more clear. Best wi

Re: [Softwires] Comments on draft-ietf-softwire-map-deployment-01

2013-07-14 Thread Qiong
Dear Qi, Thanks for your detailed review. I have incorporated most of your comments into the next version and will be submitted soon. Some comments are inline. On Sun, Jul 14, 2013 at 12:39 AM, Qi Sun wrote: > > 2. Currently, there is no DMR in MAP-E. The IPv6 address of the BR could > be pro

Re: [Softwires] Comments on draft-ietf-softwire-map-deployment-01

2013-07-14 Thread Qi Sun
t would sound confusing in my opinion, using > a DS-Lite specific option to provision MAP specific parameters. > > Thanks > Regards > Roberta > > From: softwires-boun...@ietf.org [mailto:softwires-boun...@ietf.org] On > Behalf Of Qi Sun > S

Re: [Softwires] Comments on draft-ietf-softwire-map-deployment-01

2013-07-14 Thread Roberta Maglione (robmgl)
ubject: Re: [Softwires] Comments on draft-ietf-softwire-map-deployment-01 Dear wg, I've reviewed the draft and have some comments in addition to Tom's. May the comments make the draft better. Please correct me if there is any mistake. Best Regards, Qi 1. In Fig 1, there is an element

Re: [Softwires] Comments on draft-ietf-softwire-map-deployment-01

2013-07-13 Thread Qi Sun
Dear wg, I've reviewed the draft and have some comments in addition to Tom's. May the comments make the draft better. Please correct me if there is any mistake. Best Regards, Qi 1. In Fig 1, there is an element called the Core Router. Does it mean MAP BR? I think the terms should be consist

Re: [Softwires] Comments on draft-ietf-softwire-map-deployment-01

2013-05-21 Thread Maoke
dear Tom, thanks a lot for the comments. sorry for the delay though. now maoke is replying in line regarding the section 5. 2013/5/16 Tom Taylor > I have a number of trivial editorial comments, which I will share > privately with the authors. However, I also have a few points for broader > rev

Re: [Softwires] Comments on draft-ietf-softwire-map-deployment-01

2013-05-19 Thread Qiong
Dear Tom, Sorry for late reply due to the instability of my mail account recently. Thanks a lot for your detailed comments! We will modify it accordingly. My comments for section 4 is inline below. Maoke will give his comments on section 5 in a separated mail. On Thu, May 16, 2013 at 2:11 AM, T

[Softwires] Comments on draft-ietf-softwire-map-deployment-01

2013-05-15 Thread Tom Taylor
I have a number of trivial editorial comments, which I will share privately with the authors. However, I also have a few points for broader review. Section 4.1, Figure 3 = The introductory text to this figure reads: "Figure 3 illustrate a typical case, where the home