On Sat, Nov 29, 2008 at 1:58 PM, Christian Brueffer <[EMAIL PROTECTED]> wrote: > Author: brueffer > Date: Sat Nov 29 18:58:20 2008 > New Revision: 185448 > URL: http://svn.freebsd.org/changeset/base/185448 > > Log: > Bring this a little closer to our manpage style. > > Modified: > head/share/man/man4/upgt.4 > > Modified: head/share/man/man4/upgt.4 > ============================================================================== > --- head/share/man/man4/upgt.4 Sat Nov 29 18:21:31 2008 (r185447) > +++ head/share/man/man4/upgt.4 Sat Nov 29 18:58:20 2008 (r185448) > @@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ > .\" OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE POSSIBILITY OF > .\" SUCH DAMAGE. > .\" > -.Dd $Mdocdate: April 17 2008 $ > +.Dd April 17, 2008 > .Os > .Dt UPGT 4 > .Sh NAME > @@ -140,29 +140,43 @@ driver can be configured at runtime with > .\"users have to download these files on their own. > This driver requires the > .Nm upgtfw > -be installed before it will work. > +firmware be installed before it will work.
At the risk of being a pedant, I think the grammar is not quite correct, here -- either "This driver requires that the upgtfw firmware be installed before it will work", or (my preference) "This driver requires the upgtfw firmware to be installed before it will work." -Ben Kaduk _______________________________________________ svn-src-all@freebsd.org mailing list http://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-src-all To unsubscribe, send any mail to "[EMAIL PROTECTED]"