Author: ngie Date: Thu Mar 2 06:57:13 2017 New Revision: 314546 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/314546
Log: Wordsmith mlx4{en,ib}(4) - Replace the "following lines" with more terse phrases. - Use .Lk for the mellanox URL. - Reword the SUPPORT section so it's less wordy. The DESCRIPTION section suggestions are still outstanding; improving the section requires additional review to make sure the nuance/message is correct per the original intent. Bump .Dd for the change Submitted by: wblock Sponsored by: Dell EMC Isilon Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D9241 Modified: head/share/man/man4/mlx4en.4 head/share/man/man4/mlx4ib.4 Modified: head/share/man/man4/mlx4en.4 ============================================================================== --- head/share/man/man4/mlx4en.4 Thu Mar 2 06:25:50 2017 (r314545) +++ head/share/man/man4/mlx4en.4 Thu Mar 2 06:57:13 2017 (r314546) @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ .\" .\" $FreeBSD$ .\" -.Dd January 18, 2017 +.Dd March 1, 2017 .Dt MLX4EN 4 .Os .Sh NAME @@ -32,8 +32,7 @@ .Nd "Mellanox ConnectX-3 10GbE/40GbE network adapter driver" .Sh SYNOPSIS To compile this driver into the kernel, -place the following lines in your -kernel configuration file: +place these lines in your kernel configuration file: .Bd -ragged -offset indent .Cd "options COMPAT_LINUXKPI" .Cd "device mlx4" @@ -41,13 +40,13 @@ kernel configuration file: .Ed .Pp To load the driver as a module at run-time, -run the following command as root: +run this command as root: .Bd -literal -offset indent kldload mlx4en .Ed .Pp To load the driver as a -module at boot time, place the following lines in +module at boot time, place this line in .Xr loader.conf 5 : .Bd -literal -offset indent mlx4en_load="YES" @@ -75,10 +74,10 @@ Mellanox ConnectX-3 (ETH) .Sh SUPPORT For general information and support, go to the Mellanox support website at: -.Pa http://www.mellanox.com/ . +.Lk http://www.mellanox.com/ . .Pp -If an issue is identified with this driver with a supported adapter, -email all the specific information related to the issue to +If an issue is identified with this driver and a supported network adapter, +please email the specific information to .Aq Mt freebsd-driv...@mellanox.com . .Sh SEE ALSO .Xr mlx4ib 4 , Modified: head/share/man/man4/mlx4ib.4 ============================================================================== --- head/share/man/man4/mlx4ib.4 Thu Mar 2 06:25:50 2017 (r314545) +++ head/share/man/man4/mlx4ib.4 Thu Mar 2 06:57:13 2017 (r314546) @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ .\" .\" $FreeBSD$ .\" -.Dd January 18, 2017 +.Dd March 1, 2017 .Dt MLX4IB 4 .Os .Sh NAME @@ -32,8 +32,7 @@ .Nd "Mellanox ConnectX-3 10GbE/40GbE network adapter driver" .Sh SYNOPSIS To compile this driver into the kernel, -place the following lines in your -kernel configuration file: +place these lines in your kernel configuration file: .Bd -ragged -offset indent .Cd "options COMPAT_LINUXKPI" .Cd "device mlx4" @@ -41,13 +40,13 @@ kernel configuration file: .Ed .Pp To load the driver as a module at run-time, -run the following command as root: +run this command as root: .Bd -literal -offset indent kldload mlx4ib .Ed .Pp To load the driver as a -module at boot time, place the following lines in +module at boot time, place this line in .Xr loader.conf 5 : .Bd -literal -offset indent mlx4ib_load="YES" @@ -75,10 +74,10 @@ Mellanox ConnectX-3 (IB) .Sh SUPPORT For general information and support, go to the Mellanox support website at: -.Pa http://www.mellanox.com/ . +.Lk http://www.mellanox.com/ . .Pp -If an issue is identified with this driver with a supported adapter, -email all the specific information related to the issue to +If an issue is identified with this driver and a supported network adapter, +please email the specific information to .Aq Mt freebsd-driv...@mellanox.com . .Sh SEE ALSO .Xr mlx4en 4 , _______________________________________________ svn-src-head@freebsd.org mailing list https://lists.freebsd.org/mailman/listinfo/svn-src-head To unsubscribe, send any mail to "svn-src-head-unsubscr...@freebsd.org"