[Syslog] WGLC: sysog-sign, part 1

2006-08-29 Thread David Harrington
Hi, Here is a review of the syslog-sign document. This is validation of the XML source file. This file will be submitted to the rfc-editor when the internet-draft will be publsihed as an RFC. It helps if the source is "clean", so please fix the reported problems in the source file. --- Validati

RE: [Syslog] Working Group Last Calls

2006-08-29 Thread Miao Fuyou
Sorry, the comments are for syslog-protocol. Thanks! > -Original Message- > From: Miao Fuyou [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED] > Sent: Tuesday, August 29, 2006 5:10 PM > To: '[EMAIL PROTECTED]' > Subject: RE: [Syslog] Working Group Last Calls > > Hi, > > Some my review finding: > > 1, "orig

[Syslog] WG timeline update - again

2006-08-29 Thread David Harrington
Hi, In the original timeline, we planned to start the WGLC for syslog-tls on Aug 28, but we didn't have an updated document to work with. Now a revision has been published, so we'll start the WGLC now. Here is another update to the timeline Aug 28 Close WGLC on protocol and udp Aug 28 start WG

[Syslog] WGLC closeed for protocol and udp

2006-08-29 Thread David Harrington
Hi, The WGLC was scheduled to end yesterday. We allowed the complete day to get responses in. The WGLC is now closed for draft-ietf-syslog-protocol: http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-syslog-protocol-17.txt draft-ietf-syslog-transport-udp: http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ie

[Syslog] Working Group Last Call: syslog-tls document

2006-08-29 Thread David Harrington
Hi, This message officially starts the Syslog Working Group Last Call for the following document: http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-syslog-transport-tls-03 .txt The Working Group Last Call for this document will end September 12. To help get these document reviewed throughly, we

[Syslog] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-syslog-transport-tls-03.txt

2006-08-29 Thread Internet-Drafts
A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories. This draft is a work item of the Security Issues in Network Event Logging Working Group of the IETF. Title : TLS Transport Mapping for SYSLOG Author(s) : F. Miao, M. Yuzhi File

[Syslog] WG timeline update

2006-08-29 Thread David B Harrington
Hi, We didn't include revisions and subsequent WGLCs in our timeline. Here is an update to the timeline Aug 28 Close WGLC on protocol and udp Aug 28 start WGLC on syslog-sign Sep 1 tls and mib drafts published with requested changes (before WGLC) Sep 4 start WGLC on tls and mib drafts Sep 11 C

RE: [Syslog] Working Group Last Calls

2006-08-29 Thread Miao Fuyou
Hi, Some my review finding: 1, "originator" is used twice in the document without terminology definition, "original sender" is used in other paragraphs for the same entity, replace "originator" with "original sender"? 2, Section 8.4,"Cryptographically signing messages could prevent the alter