Re: time.3: miscellaneous cleanup and rewrites

2021-08-05 Thread Ingo Schwarze
Hi Scott, since i see this wasn't committed yet, it is OK schwarze@, too. Consider leaving the .Nd alone since both jmc@ and millert@ recommended that, and use "That version counted the time" in the HISTORY section as recommended by jmc@. I think you should indeed remove the sentence about

Re: time.3: miscellaneous cleanup and rewrites

2021-07-30 Thread Todd C . Miller
On Fri, 30 Jul 2021 13:01:21 -0500, Scott Cheloha wrote: > NAME > > - get "the" time of day. I don't like having "the" in there. I'd suggest leaving this as it is or simply shortening to either "get time" or "get the time". > SYNOPSIS > > - Not a fan of the "tloc" variable name. Use "now" as

Re: time.3: miscellaneous cleanup and rewrites

2021-07-30 Thread Jason McIntyre
On Fri, Jul 30, 2021 at 01:01:21PM -0500, Scott Cheloha wrote: > Next up, time.3. > > As before, changes by section, with "I don't knows" at the end of the > change list in each section. > hi. comments inline: > NAME > > - get "the" time of day. > > SYNOPSIS > > - Not a fan of the "tloc"

time.3: miscellaneous cleanup and rewrites

2021-07-30 Thread Scott Cheloha
Next up, time.3. As before, changes by section, with "I don't knows" at the end of the change list in each section. NAME - get "the" time of day. SYNOPSIS - Not a fan of the "tloc" variable name. Use "now" as we do in other pages to reinforce the meaning of its contents. DESCRIPTION -