Donald,
I agree with your recommended changes.
While we’re discussing the draft, I've previously commented that it has
several places where interoperability between implementations could be
difficult because there are several implementation choices that can be
made, and the draft doesn’t make
Hi,
There are a bunch of RFCs referenced in this draft but not listed in the
References section. They need to be added to the References.
I think the Security Considerations section, while it provides a good set
of references, needs one added sentence: something about how the document
does not
