this is quite nice!
I think a more detail view on the affection on the finacial situation would
be helpful.

In anything else I wouldn't go more in detail in the first letter.
But I would encourage him to abolish am/pm and think about date notation.

don't forget other areas besided SI, which is like paper sizes, rational
metric products and probably more.

bye

Bob Price wrote:
> I am writing a letter to lobby for metrication to my state's senators
> and local representative.  I would like your help.  I am attaching a
> copy of the letter and would like to know what I should change to
> make a better case for metric conversion.  I have made the letter
> plain text so that all should be able to see it.
> Thanks

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