Hi, During the UTA WG meeting I volunteered to review the latest draft draft-ietf-uta-ciphersuites-in-sec-syslog-01. Thank you again to the Chris, Sean, and Jo for the update to syslog security as it is directly used / referenced in IEC TC57 WG15 documents.
I just found some nits in the draft: * Section 3 * The reference to I-D.salowey-tls-rfc8447bis is outdated and should refer to draft-ietf-tls-rfc8447bis instead * Reference to I-D.saviram-tls-deprecate-obsolete-kex is outdated and should be replaced by draft-ietf-tls-deprecate-obsolete-kex * Section 5 * Reference to I-D.ietf-tls-dtls13 should refer to RFC 9147 * The Editors not may be deleted as section 6 specifies that early data must not be used. * Section 7 * The text that will be reflected in the IEC 62351 document handling security events utilizing syslog (IEC 62351-14) needs to be updated. The ciphersuite selected in draft-ietf-uta-ciphersuites-in-sec-syslog-01 is also part of IEC 62351-3 on one hand. On the other hand, draft-ietf-uta-ciphersuites-in-sec-syslog-01 may likely become an RFC earlier than IEC 62351-14 becomes a standard. Therefore, the text for IEC 62351-14 can be shortened by simply referencing the new RFC. As the text in this draft will be removed prior to publication, I don't see a need to update it. Best regards Steffen
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