Hi Paul,
I have updated the webrev 
http://cr.opensolaris.org/~pd155743/rdiff-backup/ with the changes 
suggested. Please let me know if any changes required.

thanks,
Pradhap.D

Paul Cunningham wrote:
> usr/src/cmd/Makefile - what's the 't' on the 'rpm2cpio' line ??
>
> usr/src/cmd/rdiff-backup/METADATA - missing fields, see 
> http://wikis.sun.com/display/SFWNotes/Package+writing+guidelines
>
> usr/src/cmd/rdiff-backup/Makefile.sfw -
>    use ..
>      36    --librsync-dir=$(ROOT)$(CFGPREFIX)
>
>    use ..
>      33    cd $(VER); env - \
>    (see http://wikis.sun.com/display/SFWNotes/Package+writing+guidelines)
>
>    use $(GTAR) rather than tar (line 39)
>
> usr/src/cmd/rdiff-backup/install-sfw
>    Apply these ...
>     Roland Mainz wrote:
>      > use /usr/bin/ksh93 or /usr/bin/bash for install-sfw* and add a
>      > $ set -o errexit # at the beginning and replace ".
>      > ${SRC}/tools/install.subr" with "source ${SRC}/tools/install.subr"
>      > (the idea is to catch failures in the script and abort it at
>      > that point, right now the script will just continue)
>
> usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWrdiff-backup/pkginfo.tmpl -
>    change so that DESC= is more descriptive than NAME=, eg.
>     NAME="rdiff-backup is a backup utility"
>     DESC="rdiff-backup is a local/remote mirror and incremental backup 
> utility (1.2.1)"
>
> Paul
>
>
> Pradhap Devarajan wrote:
>   
>> Hi all,
>>    I have bumped up the version of rdiff-backup to 1.2.1. Can you please 
>> review the changes. Webrev is located at 
>> http://cr.opensolaris.org/~pd155743/rdiff-backup/
>>
>> thanks
>> Pradhap.D
>>
>> Pradhap Devarajan wrote:
>>     
>>> Hi Paul,
>>>     Thanks for your comments. I have inlined my answers
>>>
>>>  
>>>       
>>>> === Start of Comments ===
>>>>
>>>> 1. usr/src/cmd/rdiff-backup/METADATA
>>>>    I think most people use 'URL:' instead of
>>>>    'COMMUNITY:', but check?
>>>>
>>>>       
>>>>         
>>> I will stick with URL .
>>>  
>>>       
>>>> 2. usr/src/cmd/rdiff-backup/Makefile.sfw
>>>>    Do you need the 'real-all:' rule?
>>>>
>>>>       
>>>>         
>>> removed
>>>  
>>>       
>>>> 3. usr/src/cmd/rdiff-backup/install-sfw
>>>>    The following are not used BINDIR=, LIBDIR=, INCDIR=
>>>>    & MAN3DIR so delete.
>>>>
>>>>    The director created by 'mkdir -p ${DOCDIR}'
>>>>    should be in the Targetdirs file so you don't
>>>>    need these lines, just add it to Targetdirs.
>>>>
>>>>       
>>>>         
>>> done
>>>  
>>>       
>>>> 4. usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWrdiff-backup/depend
>>>>    Move the 'Copyright' lines to after the    'CDDL HEADER END' header.
>>>>
>>>>    Have you run the dependency checking script on
>>>>    your package?
>>>>       
>>>>         
>>> yes
>>>  
>>>       
>>>> 5. usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWrdiff-backup/pkginfo.tmpl
>>>>    The NAME= line is more descriptive than the
>>>>    DESC= line. Maybe swap them?
>>>>    Current DESC= line, 'is backup' maybe should
>>>>    be 'is a backup' ?
>>>>
>>>>       
>>>>         
>>> done
>>>  
>>>       
>>>> 6. usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWrdiff-backup/prototype_com
>>>>    Line ..
>>>>    '116 d none usr//share 0755 root bin'
>>>>    has double /
>>>>
>>>>    Do you need to deliver the CHANGELOG file?
>>>>
>>>>       
>>>>         
>>> done
>>>  
>>>       
>>>>    Maybe the doc/rdiff-backup-1.0.5 directory should be
>>>>    doc/rdiff-backup ?
>>>>     
>>>>         
>>> Most of the directory has version number under /usr/share/doc
>>>  
>>>       
>>>> 7. Everything else looks okay to me.
>>>>
>>>> === End of Comments =====
>>>>       
>>>>         
>>> Please let me know if any comments.
>>>
>>>       
>
>   

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