Petr,

See my comments from my quick skip through below ...

Paul

Petr Slechta wrote:
> 
> my task is to integrate Grails web framework (http://grails.org/) into 
> OpenSolaris 2008.11.
> 
> I would like to ask you to review my code: 
> http://cr.opensolaris.org/~pslechta/grails/

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1. usr/src/cmd/grails/METADATA
    Add the URL of the place you got the source code from

2. usr/src/cmd/grails/install-grails
    The directories created by the mkdirs should
    be in Targetdirs.

    Why are you not doing the file copies/chmod (cp ...)
    using the '_install ? ...' function?

    Do any of the files copied during the directory
    copy need their permissions corrected afterwards?

    Roland Mainz wrote:
    > Please use /usr/bin/ksh93 or /usr/bin/bash for install-sfw*
    > and add a
    > $ set -o xtrace # at the beginning and replace ".
    > ${SRC}/tools/install.subr" with "source ${SRC}/tools/install.subr"
    > (the idea is to catch failures in the script and abort it at that
    > point, right now the script will just continue)

3. usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWgrails/depend
    Move Copyright lines down to after the
    "CDDL HEADER END" header and change copyright year

4. usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWgrails/Makefile
    You don't need the null DATAFILES=

5. usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWgrails/prototype_i386
     & usr/src/pkgdefs/SUNWgrails/prototype_sparc
    Copyright year is wrong

=== End of Comments =====

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Paul Cunningham
Software Engineer
Tadpole Computer Products

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