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Dr. CMR
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Sent: Tuesday, July 01, 2003 8:00 AM
Subject: ShopTalk: Golf Illustrated

Hi guys

 Just want to let you know to check out the July issue of Golf Illustrated, the feature and cover story was done by my director of golf Bob Corbo with Al Barkow on the golf swing. I would like to get your feedback on it,

   Charlie B

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