Looks pretty good and a very good problem to solve. My feedback:
1. It's not clear why you'd have both a "Request a Quote" and a "Become a Reseller" button - try to limit the amount your audience has to think and replace it with a single button - "Get in Touch" 2. The copy suggests that you're after resellers/partners, so refine your copy around that audience Hope that helps! Tim On Monday, April 30, 2012 11:46:55 PM UTC-7, caseyjohnellis wrote: > > Hey guys and girls, > > I figured this might be a good place to get feedback on an MVP I'm working > on - see http://whitelabelsecurity.com. > The business is already very active but at this stage I'm working to > increase the reseller base both in Australia and abroad. > I've built a pretty significant list through another project of mine > http://rdpcheck.com which I plan to pitch White Label Security to, and > knowing how helpful a bunch you all are, I wanted to see if the pitch and > CTA are clear enough. I've had my nose pressed up against this thing for a > bit to long now to trust my objectivity. > > Any/all feedback appreciated! > > Casey > 0407252121 > -- You received this message because you are subscribed to the Silicon Beach Australia mailing list. Vist http://siliconbeachaustralia.org for more Forum rules 1) No lurkers! It is expected that you introduce yourself. 2) No jobs postings. You can use http://siliconbeachaustralia.org/jobs To post to this group, send email to silicon-beach-australia@googlegroups.com To unsubscribe from this group, send email to silicon-beach-australia+unsubscr...@googlegroups.com For more options, visit this group at http://groups.google.com/group/silicon-beach-australia?hl=en?hl=en
