I only looked at your site for a second, but my constructive criticism involves the fact that I didn't read anything once the page loaded. Here's the reason.
I have a lot of difficulty reading long passages that aren't broken up into paragraphs. My mind needs to see those little spaces between thoughts in order to more easily scan the text. If the text is 100 sentences all strung together with no breaks at all, as your site was, I just skip the whole thing. A paragraph is typically only 3 or 4 sentances. It can be more or less, but the easy rule of thumb is: each paragraph should be a single thought. When you move to a new thought, start a new paragraph. This post is an example of that rule. I can't critique the content of your site, because I couldn't read it, for the reason previously noted. One other bit of advice: If you want to increase traffic to your site, include a complete working link. Don't just start with "www.", use the entire link, as in http://www.silverswill.com so folks can just click on it, rather than having to cut and paste. I look forward to seeing the development of your site. Please take this as the helpful suggestion it was intended to be, and not an attack. __________________________________________________ Do you Yahoo!? U2 on LAUNCH - Exclusive greatest hits videos http://launch.yahoo.com/u2 -- The silver-list is a moderated forum for discussion of colloidal silver. Instructions for unsubscribing may be found at: http://silverlist.org To post, address your message to: silver-list@eskimo.com Silver-list archive: http://escribe.com/health/thesilverlist/index.html List maintainer: Mike Devour <mdev...@eskimo.com>
