Last sentence in 3rd paragraph in Sec 1:
"When SIP entities upstream receive the first 2xx final response, and they do
not to intend to accept
subsequent 2xx final responses, they will automatically terminate other
associated outstanding early
dialogs. If additional 2xx final responses are received, for INVITE initiated
dialogs those SIP
entities will normally send a BYE request using the dialog identifier retrieved
from the subsequent
2xx final response."
since the context is 199 and early dialogs, do we need the reference to INV or
can we simplify say :
"If additional 2xx final responses are received, they will send a BYE request
using the dialog identifier retrieved from the subsequent
2xx final response"
Sec 4.1, last sentence, readability is better if modified as :
"...if a 199 response is received for that early dialog, client terminates it.
Afterwards, client SHOULD act as before the first early dialog as established
Other nits:
Sec 1 and 4, decissions -> decisions
Sec4, dialogusage -> dialog usage
desribed -> described
Sec 4.1example 6, diaogs ->dialogs
Sec 4.2, announcement -> announcement
Sec 6, immedialetly > immediately
occurred -> occurred
received -> received
reliably -> reliably
prxy -> proxy
Sec 7, compability -> compatibility
Thanks,
Serhad
________________________________
From: [email protected] [mailto:[email protected]] On Behalf Of Christer
Holmberg
Sent: Wednesday, January 07, 2009 12:49 AM
To: [email protected]
Subject: [Sip] New version (-04) of draft-ietf-sip-199
Hi,
Based on comments and discussions, I've submitted a new version of the 199
draft.
The currently remaining to-do is to add text to the security chapter.
The draft can also be found at:
http://users.piuha.net/cholmber/drafts/draft-ietf-sip-199-04.txt
Regards,
Christer
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