hmm...
(In a point of view of Charles)
*It was one of those rainy days ya know, back in the
1940's when i was a private eye detective. Yeah the job was
real tough man! Back then you couldn't turn your back on anyone
without suspecting them for whatever ya know? specially since my
partner Det. David died at a night club one nite.
*I remember like it was yesturday....
*After a night of solving a case we decided to celebrate*
I know this great place downtown *says David* its got dancing
girls, booze and did i mention tons of entertainment if ya know what i
mean! yeah!
*So weees decided to go to this place. When we got there the line
to get in was long but since David knew the bodyguard we got in
quickly. The place was bouncin. We sat down and ordered two drinks and
were talking about the day when we were interupted by the anouncer on
stage*
WELCOME ALL TO THE QTHEAVEN NIGHT CLUB! OUR LAST
PERFORMANCE OF THE NIGHT IS NONE OTHER THAN MISS JACKIE!!
*all the guys in the audience were clapping maniacly and some of
them went up close to get a better view. Miss Jackie came out in a red
hot short dress and a feather boa. She starts to do her
number*
*Something about her reminded me of something... like i knew her
from somewhere...
David! thats Curley's sister! *I said to David*
who?! *wonders David*
The one that we killed earlier today! *I said almost panicking*
We better get out of here!
Charles! Baby! *says david laughing* relax have another
drink!
*I couldnt relax i knew something bad was going to happen...so i
excused myself to the bathroom and left David to his googling. I didnt
get as far as a foot in when i heard from on stage a little
scuffle*
HEY YOUR THE SON OF A BITCH THAT KILLED MY BROTHER! *yells
Jackie* KILL THIS WILL YA! *Jackie gets out her gun from her leg strap
and fires 3 shots at David*
*the crowd starts screaming and running away leaving David on the
floor. I come up running to David seeing if he was ok*
It was worth it! *says David under his last gasp for air* I
regret nothing.....
*Later that night the cops arrested Jackie but mistakenly took
her to a all male jail cells... nobody seemed to mind. They even let
her do a couple shows a month.*
*and me, now retired in Miami I always look back and think of
different ways to end that night....
the end...
bleeeh! this one sucked too LoL
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Message-------
Date: Saturday,
October 04, 2003 04:31:45 PM
Subject: [Sndbox]
Alright..
Hey Huggy, why should Jen,
Stephi and I get to have all the fun? Create a fictional past for
these 3: Jackie, the Rev, and David. lol
Greg Hopper
"Why is it that our
children can't read a Bible in school, but they can
in
prison?"
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