Module Name: src
Committed By: wiz
Date: Sun Jul 26 21:47:16 UTC 2020
Modified Files:
src/share/man/man4: wwanc.4
Log Message:
Minor wording improvements.
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cvs rdiff -u -r1.3 -r1.4 src/share/man/man4/wwanc.4
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Modified files:
Index: src/share/man/man4/wwanc.4
diff -u src/share/man/man4/wwanc.4:1.3 src/share/man/man4/wwanc.4:1.4
--- src/share/man/man4/wwanc.4:1.3 Sun Jul 26 15:57:03 2020
+++ src/share/man/man4/wwanc.4 Sun Jul 26 21:47:16 2020
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\" $NetBSD: wwanc.4,v 1.3 2020/07/26 15:57:03 jdolecek Exp $
+.\" $NetBSD: wwanc.4,v 1.4 2020/07/26 21:47:16 wiz Exp $
.\"
.\" Copyright (c) 2020 The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.
.\" All rights reserved.
@@ -38,13 +38,14 @@ The
.Nm
driver provides support for Fibocom L850-GL / Intel XMM7360.
.Pp
-Device establishes connections via cellular networks such as
+The device establishes connections via cellular networks such as
GPRS, UMTS, and LTE.
They appear as a regular point-to-point network interface,
transporting raw IP frames.
.Pp
-SIM card needs to be unlocked, driver provides no means to provide
-password for the SIM.
+The SIM card needs to be unlocked, the
+.Nm
+driver provides no means to provide a password for the SIM.
.Sh HARDWARE
The following devices should work:
.Pp
@@ -81,7 +82,7 @@ The
.Nm
driver IPv6 support is untested.
.Pp
-Network initialization requires Python script published on the Linux
+Network initialization requires a Python script published in the Linux
driver repository.
The script requires the management device nodes to be created via:
.Bd -literal -offset indent
