Module Name: othersrc
Committed By: dholland
Date: Mon Aug 8 07:22:13 UTC 2011
Modified Files:
othersrc/external/bsd/iscsi/sbin/iscsictl: iscsictl.8
Log Message:
Minor edits (I don't know enough about how thi works to help that much)
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cvs rdiff -u -r1.1 -r1.2 othersrc/external/bsd/iscsi/sbin/iscsictl/iscsictl.8
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Modified files:
Index: othersrc/external/bsd/iscsi/sbin/iscsictl/iscsictl.8
diff -u othersrc/external/bsd/iscsi/sbin/iscsictl/iscsictl.8:1.1 othersrc/external/bsd/iscsi/sbin/iscsictl/iscsictl.8:1.2
--- othersrc/external/bsd/iscsi/sbin/iscsictl/iscsictl.8:1.1 Mon Aug 8 06:52:59 2011
+++ othersrc/external/bsd/iscsi/sbin/iscsictl/iscsictl.8 Mon Aug 8 07:22:12 2011
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\" $NetBSD: iscsictl.8,v 1.1 2011/08/08 06:52:59 agc Exp $
+.\" $NetBSD: iscsictl.8,v 1.2 2011/08/08 07:22:12 dholland Exp $
.\"
.\" Copyright (c) 2011 Alistair Crooks <[email protected]>
.\" All rights reserved.
@@ -49,14 +49,15 @@
and the device which receives the command and takes action
is called the target; this mirrors SCSI devices, although instead
of being physically attached to a host, the SCSI commands and
-responses take place over a TCP connection.
+responses take place over a network.
iSCSI communication is done in sessions.
-The iSCSI initiator logs in to a terget across the network,
-possible authenticating itself; this creates an iSCSI session between initiator
+The iSCSI initiator logs in to a target across the network,
+possibly authenticating itself; this creates an iSCSI session between initiator
and target.
-The initiator can then issue commands
+The initiator can then issue commands to
and read responses from the target.
.Pp
+.\" XXX what does this mean?
Firstly, a TCP connection
the iSCSI initiator on the local machine must be made
aware of the network location of the target.
@@ -98,14 +99,14 @@
command, please ee the worked example below.
.It list_targets
.It add_send_target
-this coomand allows the iSCSI initiator to connect to an iSCSI
+this command allows the iSCSI initiator to connect to an iSCSI
target. The subsequent
.Fl a
target provides the address of the target.
This can be provided as a numerical IP address,
or as a textual FQDN.
For more context on the exact usage of this
-command, please ee the worked example below.
+command, please see the worked example below.
.It remove_send_target
.It list_send_targets
.It add_isns_server
@@ -124,7 +125,7 @@
session which has been created will be displayed, along with the connection
number.
For more context on the exact usage of this
-command, please ee the worked example below.
+command, please see the worked example below.
.It logout
.It add_connection
.It remove_connection
@@ -140,16 +141,15 @@
To list the session information, this command is used.
The session number and target information for each of the targets are displayed.
For more context on the exact usage of this
-command, please ee the worked example below.
+command, please see the worked example below.
.It set_node_name
.El
-.Pp
+.Sh EXAMPLES
.Nm
is intended to be used as follows:
-.Sh EXAMPLES
.Pp
-The initiator itself can be loaded as an lkm, and works successfully
-on 2.0 (the "burner" host), running against the NetBSD target on a 5.99 host.
+The initiator itself can be loaded as a kernel module, and works successfully
+on 2.0 (the host called "burner"), running against the NetBSD target on a 5.99 host.
.Pp
.Bd -literal
burner# modload -v -s -p /usr/lkm/iscsi_post.sh /usr/lkm/iscsidrv.o
