Module Name: src
Committed By: pgoyette
Date: Sat Jan 12 03:16:43 UTC 2013
Modified Files:
src/share/man/man4: envsys.4
Log Message:
"Each sensor dictionary" is a singular subject, so refer to "its"
characteristics, not "their" characteristics.
Also rephrase the device-properties section - device-properties is not
a sensor.
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cvs rdiff -u -r1.49 -r1.50 src/share/man/man4/envsys.4
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Modified files:
Index: src/share/man/man4/envsys.4
diff -u src/share/man/man4/envsys.4:1.49 src/share/man/man4/envsys.4:1.50
--- src/share/man/man4/envsys.4:1.49 Thu Feb 9 18:10:26 2012
+++ src/share/man/man4/envsys.4 Sat Jan 12 03:16:43 2013
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\" $NetBSD: envsys.4,v 1.49 2012/02/09 18:10:26 riz Exp $
+.\" $NetBSD: envsys.4,v 1.50 2013/01/12 03:16:43 pgoyette Exp $
.\"
.\" Copyright (c) 2007 The NetBSD Foundation, Inc.
.\" All rights reserved.
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
.\" ARISING IN ANY WAY OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE
.\" POSSIBILITY OF SUCH DAMAGE.
.\"
-.Dd March 14, 2010
+.Dd January 10, 2013
.Dt ENVSYS 4
.Os
.Sh NAME
@@ -78,14 +78,13 @@ framework.
It will contain an array of dictionaries per device
and one dictionary per sensor plus another special dictionary that
contains the properties for a device.
-Each sensor dictionary will have their own characteristics and values.
+Each sensor dictionary will have its own characteristics and values.
.Pp
The following XML property list represents a virtual device
.Dq device0
-with one sensor
+with one entry for sensor
.Dq sensor0
-and all available properties set on it, plus another sensor for
-the
+and all available properties set on it, plus another entry for the
.Dq device-properties
dictionary (which contains specific properties for a device):
.Pp
