Module Name:    src
Committed By:   pgoyette
Date:           Thu Dec  8 06:56:21 UTC 2016

Modified Files:
        src/share/man/man9 [pgoyette-localcount]: localcount.9

Log Message:
Minor tweaks.


To generate a diff of this commit:
cvs rdiff -u -r1.1.2.6 -r1.1.2.7 src/share/man/man9/localcount.9

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Modified files:

Index: src/share/man/man9/localcount.9
diff -u src/share/man/man9/localcount.9:1.1.2.6 src/share/man/man9/localcount.9:1.1.2.7
--- src/share/man/man9/localcount.9:1.1.2.6	Wed Aug  3 13:11:36 2016
+++ src/share/man/man9/localcount.9	Thu Dec  8 06:56:21 2016
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-.\"	$NetBSD: localcount.9,v 1.1.2.6 2016/08/03 13:11:36 pgoyette Exp $
+.\"	$NetBSD: localcount.9,v 1.1.2.7 2016/12/08 06:56:21 pgoyette Exp $
 .\"
 .\" Copyright (c) 2016
 .\" All rights reserved.
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
 .\" ARISING IN ANY WAY OUT OF THE USE OF THIS SOFTWARE, EVEN IF ADVISED OF THE
 .\" POSSIBILITY OF SUCH DAMAGE.
 .\"
-.Dd August 2, 2016
+.Dd December 8, 2016
 .Dt LOCALCOUNT 9
 .Os
 .Sh NAME
@@ -77,11 +77,13 @@ and almost always more than
 .Pp
 As a rough heuristic,
 .Nm
-should be used for classes of objects of which there are maybe a few dozen
-instances but not a few thousand instances (e.g. autoconf devices, but not
+should be used for classes of objects of which there are perhaps a few dozen
+instances (such as
+.Xr autoconf 9
+devices) but not thousands of instances (such as
 network flows) and on which there may be a mixture of long-term I/O waits,
 such as xyzread for a device xyz(4), and short-term fast operations, such as
-xyzioctl(IOC_READ_A_CPU_REG).
+.Dv xyzioctl(IOC_READ_A_CPU_REG) .
 .Sh FUNCTIONS
 .Bl -tag -width abcd
 .It Fn localcount_init "lc"

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