There isn't a line numbered version. I would just quote passages, citing their section numbers, and say specifically what you'd like to see them changed to. I'd send this feedback to the specs list (and drop general so people aren't receiving duplicate messages).
-- Mike
From: Paul Madsen [mailto:[EMAIL PROTECTED]
Sent: Thursday, October 23, 2008 6:19 AM
To: Mike Jones
Cc: specs@openid.net; [EMAIL PROTECTED]
Subject: Re: PAPE Specification Review Period Commencing
Hi Mike, if there were an official line numbered version, it would enable
people providing comments against specific lines
Or is there another preferred mechanism for feedback?
Thanks
Paul
Mike Jones wrote:
The OpenID Provider Authentication Policy Extension (PAPE) Working Group
recommends approval of PAPE Draft 7 as an OpenID Specification. The draft is
available at these locations:
http://openid.net/specs/openid-provider-authentication-policy-extension-1_0-07.html
http://openid.net/specs/openid-provider-authentication-policy-extension-1_0-07.txt
This note starts the 60 day public review period for the specification draft in
accordance with the OpenID Foundation IPR policies and procedures. This review
period will end on Sunday, December 21st. Unless issues are identified during
the review that the working group believes must be addressed by revising the
draft, this review period will be followed by a seven day voting period during
which OpenID Foundation members will vote on whether to approve this draft as
an OpenID Specification.
As background, the proposal to create the working group, which the membership
approved, is available at
http://openid.net/pipermail/specs/2008-May/002323.html. The specifications
council report on the creation of the working group is available at
http://openid.net/pipermail/specs/2008-May/002326.html.
-- Mike
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