Hi Ran,

Thanks for your feedback. Please see my replies inline with [Jie]:

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Sent: Wednesday, March 11, 2020 12:08 PM
To: Dongjie (Jimmy) <jie.d...@huawei.com>
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Subject: Re:[spring] FW: New Version Notification 
fordraft-dong-spring-sr-for-enhanced-vpn-07.txt


Hi Jie,

I don’t think it’s time to call for adoption. Teas Slice DT is still working on 
the definition and the framework of the transport slice,which has not been 
accepted by the teas working group.
[Jie] If you read the latest version or the previous (-06) version of this 
document, you would find that this draft defines a generic enhancement to SR 
data plane. Although network slicing is one of the target use cases, this 
document is relatively independent from the discussion and progress of the NS 
design team. Thus I don’t see a reason of not progressing this work in SPRING.

For the draft, I have some comments:

1.  Compared with the ietf-teas-enhanced-vpn, It seems like that there is no 
more new technology. What's the meaning of this draft as standard track?

[Jie] The proposed enhancement to SR data plane is clearly described in the 
draft. , in short it introduces new semantics to SR SIDs, so that the SIDs 
could be used to identify the set of resources used for packet processing.

2.  Control plane extensions that you referred in this draft is 
ietf-dong-lsr-sr-enhanced-vpn, and ietf-dong-idr-bgpls-sr-enhanced-vpn, and we 
also have a series of control plane drafts: 
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-zch-lsr-isis-network-slicing-03, 
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-chen-idr-bgp-ls-transport-slice-00 , 
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-peng-pce-te-constraints-02 satisfying the 
same requirement. So Control plane extensions are still an open question, and 
needing further discussing.

[Jie] Normally the SR data plane functions and procedures are defined in SPRING 
first, then the control plane extensions would be discussed and defined in 
relevant WGs to support the required SR data plane functions. Do you mean the 
control plane should be discussed first?

3.  For slice resources, our draft: 
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-peng-teas-network-slicing-03  induced 
slice-id(AII) for slice resources management, and our solution can 
differentiate them (e.g. L2 link or L3 interface), how to compute SR-BE or 
SR-TE path according to AII combined with other criteria. This isnot very clear 
in your draft.

[Jie] Again, this document is not for network slicing only, while it seems the 
draft you mentioned is. Besides, the mechanisms and example of using the 
resource-aware SIDs for packet forwarding with SR based explicit path and loose 
path has been described in this document. Please refer to section 2 and section 
4.2 for more information.

Best regards,

Jie



Regards,

Ran


原始邮件
发件人:Dongjie(Jimmy) <jie.d...@huawei.com<mailto:jie.d...@huawei.com>>
收件人:'SPRING WG List' <spring@ietf.org<mailto:spring@ietf.org>>;
抄送人:spring-cha...@ietf.org<mailto:spring-cha...@ietf.org> 
<spring-cha...@ietf.org<mailto:spring-cha...@ietf.org>>;
日 期 :2020年03月10日 18:00
主 题 :[spring] FW: New Version Notification 
fordraft-dong-spring-sr-for-enhanced-vpn-07.txt
Hi all,

We've submitted a new revision of draft-dong-spring-sr-for-enhanced-vpn.

This version includes some editorial changes based on the previous -06 version, 
which have solved the comments received before and during IETF 106 meeting.

The authors believe this document is ready for WG adoption, and thus solicit 
the WG to consider initiating the adoption poll on it. Thanks.

Best regards,
Jie

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Subject: New Version Notification for 
draft-dong-spring-sr-for-enhanced-vpn-07.txt


A new version of I-D, draft-dong-spring-sr-for-enhanced-vpn-07.txt
has been successfully submitted by Jie Dong and posted to the IETF repository.

Name:        draft-dong-spring-sr-for-enhanced-vpn
Revision:    07
Title:        Segment Routing for Resource Guaranteed Virtual Networks
Document date:    2020-03-09
Group:        Individual Submission
Pages:        18
URL:            
https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-dong-spring-sr-for-enhanced-vpn-07.txt
Status:         
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-dong-spring-sr-for-enhanced-vpn/
Htmlized:       
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-dong-spring-sr-for-enhanced-vpn-07
Htmlized:       
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-dong-spring-sr-for-enhanced-vpn
Diff:           
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-dong-spring-sr-for-enhanced-vpn-07

Abstract:
   This document describes the mechanism to associate Segment Routing
   Identifiers (SIDs) with network resource attributes.  The resource-
   aware SIDs retain their original functionality, with the additional
   semantics of identifying the set of network resources available for
   the packet processing action.  These SIDs can be used to build SR
   paths with reserved network resources.  In addition, these SID can
   also be used to build SR based virtual networks, which provide the
   network topology and resource attributes required by particular
   services.  The proposed mechanism is applicable to both segment
   routing with MPLS data plane (SR-MPLS) and segment routing with IPv6
   data plane (SRv6).





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