Now that this file is taking on the nature of a help file, I've attempted to improve its readability, with:

1. Minor layout changes (whitespace between sections)
2. Spell check, inc. s/backend/back end (standardization)
3. General copy-edit

Pretty trivial stuff.
--

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>From 6b8f1764a2419011c580000b0434dba724efd051 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: David O'Brien <daobr...@daobrien.csb>
Date: Wed, 19 May 2010 17:17:51 +1000
Subject: [PATCH] Copy-edit and format review sssd.conf

---
 src/examples/sssd.conf |   34 ++++++++++++++++++----------------
 1 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/examples/sssd.conf b/src/examples/sssd.conf
index 3b67dae..33b777e 100644
--- a/src/examples/sssd.conf
+++ b/src/examples/sssd.conf
@@ -1,32 +1,34 @@
 [sssd]
 config_file_version = 2
+
 # Number of times services should attempt to reconnect in the
 # event of a crash or restart before they give up
 reconnection_retries = 3
-# if a backend is particularly slow you can raise this timeout here
+
+# If a back end is particularly slow you can raise this timeout here
 sbus_timeout = 30
 services = nss, pam
-; domains = LOCAL,LDAP
-# SSSD will not start if you don't configure any domain.
-# Add new domains condifgurations as [domain/<NAME>] sections.
-# Then add the list of domains (in the order you want them to be
-# queried in the 'domains" attribute above and uncomment it
 
+# SSSD will not start if you do not configure any domains.
+# Add new domain configurations as [domain/<NAME>] sections, and
+# then add the list of domains (in the order you want them to be
+# queried) to the "domains" attribute below and uncomment it.
+; domains = LOCAL,LDAP
 
 [nss]
-# the following prevents sssd for searching for the root user/group in
-# all domains (you can add here a comma separated list of system accounts are
-# always going to be /etc/passwd users, or that you want to filter out)
+# The following prevents SSSD from searching for the root user/group in
+# all domains (you can add here a comma-separated list of system accounts that
+# are always going to be /etc/passwd users, or that you want to filter out).
 filter_groups = root
 filter_users = root
 reconnection_retries = 3
 
-# The EntryCacheTimeout indicates the number of seconds to retain before
-# an entry in cache is considered stale and must block to refresh.
+# The EntryCacheTimeout indicates the number of seconds to retain an
+# entry in cache before it is considered stale and must block to refresh.
 # The EntryCacheNoWaitRefreshTimeout indicates the number of seconds to
 # wait before updating the cache out-of-band. (NSS requests will still
 # be returned from cache until the full EntryCacheTimeout). Setting this
-# value to 0 turns this feature off (default)
+# value to 0 turns this feature off (default).
 ; entry_cache_timeout = 600
 ; entry_cache_nowait_timeout = 300
 
@@ -34,7 +36,7 @@ reconnection_retries = 3
 reconnection_retries = 3
 
 # Example LOCAL domain that stores all users natively in the SSSD internal
-# directory. These local users and groups are not visibile in /etc/passwd, it
+# directory. These local users and groups are not visibile in /etc/passwd; it
 # now contains only root and system accounts.
 ; [domain/LOCAL]
 ; description = LOCAL Users domain
@@ -44,9 +46,9 @@ reconnection_retries = 3
 ; max_id = 999
 
 # Example native LDAP domain
-# ldap_schema can be set to 'rfc2307', which uses the 'memberuid' attribute
-# for group membership, or to 'rfc2307bis', which uses the 'member' attribute
-# to denote group membership. Changes to this setting affects only how we
+# ldap_schema can be set to "rfc2307", which uses the "memberuid" attribute
+# for group membership, or to "rfc2307bis", which uses the "member" attribute
+# to denote group membership. Changes to this setting affect only how we
 # determine the groups a user belongs to and will have no negative effect on
 # data about the user itself. If you do not know this value, ask an
 # administrator.
-- 
1.5.5.6

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