On (09/07/16 11:35), Jakub Hrozek wrote:
>On Fri, Jul 08, 2016 at 03:11:12PM -0400, Dan Lavu wrote:
>> So I didn't need to review this?
>
>Yes, but we had to release the rebase, sorry. I think we should apply
>your edits as a follow-up to the original patch.
Attached is a "interdiff" between original and Dan's version.

LS
>From 7d6348eaf2475f5255a1b777b8ecbeed63319ff7 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Dan Lavu <dl...@redhat.com>
Date: Mon, 11 Jul 2016 12:27:34 +0200
Subject: [PATCH] MAN: Update description of sssctl

---
 src/man/sssctl.8.xml | 13 ++++++-------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/man/sssctl.8.xml b/src/man/sssctl.8.xml
index 
721d0a2f7558b105c22135388757f92270265c4a..cbb632b68b145680ab94523b90180c5f76d69eb9
 100644
--- a/src/man/sssctl.8.xml
+++ b/src/man/sssctl.8.xml
@@ -29,12 +29,11 @@
     <refsect1 id='description'>
         <title>DESCRIPTION</title>
         <para>
-            <command>sssctl</command> provides simple and unified way to obtain
-            information about SSSD status such as active server or list of
-            auto-discovered servers and domains or information about cached
-            objects. It also provides tools to manage SSSD data files during
-            troubleshooting such as a safe way to remove cache files or 
fetching
-            all SSSD log files and more.
+            <command>sssctl</command> provides a simple and unified way
+            to obtain information about SSSD status, such as active server,
+            auto-discovered servers, domains and cached objects. In addition,
+            it can manage SSSD data files for troubleshooting in such a way
+            that is safe to manipulate while SSSD is running.
         </para>
     </refsect1>
 
@@ -42,7 +41,7 @@
         <title>AVAILABLE COMMANDS</title>
         <para>
             To list all available commands run <command>sssctl</command>
-            without any parameter. To print help for selected command
+            without any parameters. To print help for selected command
             run <command>sssctl COMMAND --help</command>.
         </para>
     </refsect1>
-- 
2.7.4

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