At the bottom of http://freenetproject.org/download.html there is a section 
labeled "Upgrading." The paragraph I'm concerned with is pasted below:

"Freenet provides now an update-over-freenet mechanism: It will keep itself up 
to date automatically from other Freenet nodes, and this will normally work 
even if it is unable to route to them due to them being too new. This is 
anonymous and secure, and we recommend people use it. However, if something is 
severely broken, you can update your node manually from our servers:"

Changes that would make it flow better:
1. either "Freenet //now// provides..." or simply "Freenet provides..." I would 
recommend simply removing "now", as it gives the impression that the project is 
volatile, untrustworthy, and just plain bad software. While the seasoned user 
knows not to trust Freenet, it's better to appeal to someone's logic before 
their read-a-book-by-its-cover instinct makes us lose another potential 
user/contributor.
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