On Fri, 12 Jan 2007, Peter Keung wrote:

> Modified: trunk/Cache/docs/tutorial.txt
> ===================================================================
> --- trunk/Cache/docs/tutorial.txt     2007-01-12 13:10:55 UTC (rev 4496)
> +++ trunk/Cache/docs/tutorial.txt     2007-01-12 22:35:36 UTC (rev 4497)

<snip>

> @@ -59,61 +57,55 @@
>  -----------
>  
>  _`Cache`
> -  A location that stores `cache item`_. A cache is created with the
> +  A location that stores `cache item`_ s. A cache is created with
>    ezcCacheManager::createCache(), preferrably at the beginning of your 
> script.
> -  A cache with it's `cache identifier`_ - the first parameter to
> +  A cache with its `cache identifier`_ - the first parameter to
>    ezcCacheManager::createCache() - can only be created once. After it has 
> been
> -  created at the beginning of your request you can obtain a reference to it
> -  throughout the whole request by calling ezcCacheManager::getCache() with as
> -  first parameter the $id with which it was created.
> +  created, you can reference it by calling ezcCacheManager::getCache(), using
> +  the corresponding $id as the first parameter.
>  
>  _`Cache identifier`
> -  An identifier that uniquely identifies a `cache`_ which contains a number 
> of
> -  `cache item`_ s.
> +  An identifier that uniquely identifies a `cache`_.

I added the sentence that you removed now to be extra clear - although 
it was redundant information. I think we should add back something like:

This `cache`_, indentified by this `cache identifier`_ contains a number 
of `cache item`_ s.

regards,
Derick

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