Hi Kore,

Thanks for your your feedback!

On 7-Feb-07, at 3:56 AM, Kore Nordmann wrote:

-The data is provided through ezcGraphDataSets which are normally create from -simple arrays, but also can perform statistical operations on the data, as you
-will see later.
+Data is provided through ezcGraphDataSet arrays. You also can perform
+statistical operations on data, as you will see later.

This is not particular correct. ezcGraphDataSet represent data sets, and
*can* be constructed from arrays. ezcGraphDataSets are objects
implementing some interfaces that make them act like arrays in some
cases, but there is a big difference between arrays and objects in
general.


This has now been changed to read: Data is provided through ezcGraphDataSet objects, which are normally created
from simple arrays.





- This renderer is default for the labeled axis in line charts and draws the - label centered next to the step. Therefor this renderer omits the label for - initial step on the axis (0, 0), but this can be forced as shown in example - 14. The label is omitted, because it would interfere with the axis or the
-  labels of the other axis, and probably not really readable.
+ This renderer is the default for the labeled axis in line charts and draws the + label centered next to the step. Therefore, this renderer omits the label for + the initial step on the axis (0, 0) by default. However, this can be forced + as shown in example 14. The label is omitted because it would interfere with
+  the readability of the axis or the labels of the other axis.

Is "interfere the readability" intended? It reads a bit strange for me,
but my knowlegde in english is limited, of course. :)


This has now been changed to read: The label is omitted because it would interfere with the axis or the labels of the other axis, and thus be difficult to read.

Peter

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