Author: pke
Date: Mon Nov  5 21:50:53 2007
New Revision: 6677

Log:
Edited the "about" text for eZ Components

Modified:
    docs/website/about.txt

Modified: docs/website/about.txt
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--- docs/website/about.txt [iso-8859-1] (original)
+++ docs/website/about.txt [iso-8859-1] Mon Nov  5 21:50:53 2007
@@ -1,20 +1,20 @@
 About eZ Components
 ===================
 
-The eZ Components are an evolution of the libraries of `eZ Publish 3`__ .
-The libraries of eZ Publish 3 were analysed for weaknesses and strengths
+eZ Components is an evolution of the `eZ Publish 3`__ libraries.
+The eZ Publish 3 libraries were analyzed for strengths and weaknesses
 and a plan was created to re-engineer those libraries. During the planning
-phase of this project, `eZ Systems`__ decided to release those libraries
-as an Open Source project. Initially the LGPL__ license was chosen, but
+phase of this project, `eZ Systems`__ decided to release the libraries
+as an Open Source project. Initially, the LGPL__ license was chosen, but
 this was later changed to the `New BSD`__ license to allow for easier
 interoperability with as many other Open Source projects as possible.
 
-The eZ Components library is a high quality library of independent
+eZ Components is a high-quality library of independent
 components, where the APIs of the different components are kept as 
 consistent as possible.
 
-The eZ Components are backed by `eZ Systems`__ both as an Open Source
-project and commercially. Commercial support of the eZ Components is
+eZ Components is backed by `eZ Systems`__, both as an Open Source
+project and commercially. Commercial support of eZ Components is
 therefore also available through eZ Systems. If you are interested
 in commercial support, please contact us through our `contact form`__,
 selecting the option "Information about eZ Components".


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