Author: gjb
Date: Sat Apr 13 00:54:56 2019
New Revision: 346171
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/base/346171
Log:
Fix some grammar nits.
Submitted by: adamw
Sponsored by: The FreeBSD Foundation
Modified:
stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
Modified: stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml
==============================================================================
--- stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Fri Apr 12
23:22:27 2019 (r346170)
+++ stable/11/release/doc/en_US.ISO8859-1/relnotes/article.xml Sat Apr 13
00:54:56 2019 (r346171)
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@
names.</para>
<para revision="344020">The &man.pfctl.8; utility has been
- updated to provide more clear output and reference the
+ updated to provide clearer output and reference the
<literal>net.pf.request_maxcount</literal> &man.sysctl.8;
if a defined table is too large.</para>
@@ -221,9 +221,8 @@
names.</para>
<para revision="345561">The &man.sh.1; utility has been updated
- to add the <literal>pipefail</literal> option which allows
- checking the exit status of all commands in a pipeline more
- easily.</para>
+ to add the <literal>pipefail</literal> option which simplifies
+ checking the exit status of all commands in a pipeline.</para>
<para revision="345878">The &man.patch.1; utility has been
updated to exit successfully if the input patch file is
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