man/systemd.exec.xml | 19 ++++++++++---------
man/systemd.service.xml | 6 +++---
man/systemd.unit.xml | 2 +-
man/systemd.xml | 12 ++++++------
4 files changed, 20 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)
diff --git a/man/systemd.exec.xml b/man/systemd.exec.xml
index 51dcdcd..7c8005c 100644
--- a/man/systemd.exec.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.exec.xml
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@
be specified more than once in which
case all listed groups are set as
supplementary groups. This option does
- not override but extend the list of
+ not override but extends the list of
supplementary groups configured in the
system group database for the
user.</para></listitem>
@@ -301,10 +301,11 @@
below) and the executed process
becomes the controlling process of the
terminal. If the terminal is already
- being controlled by another process it
- is waited until that process releases
- the
- terminal. <option>tty-force</option>
+ being controlled by another process the
+ executed process waits until the current
+ controlling process releases the
+ terminal.
+ <option>tty-force</option>
is similar to <option>tty</option>,
but the executed process is forcefully
and immediately made the controlling
@@ -500,15 +501,15 @@
<term><varname>TimerSlackNSec=</varname></term>
<listitem><para>Sets the timer slack
in nanoseconds for the executed
- processes The timer slack controls the
+ processes. The timer slack controls the
accuracy of wake-ups triggered by
timers. See
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>prctl</refentrytitle><manvolnum>2</manvolnum></citerefentry>
for more information. Note that in
contrast to most other time span
- definitions this value is takes a
- nano-seconds integer and does not
- understand any other
+ definitions this parameter takes an
+ integer value in nano-seconds and does
+ not understand any other
units.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
diff --git a/man/systemd.service.xml b/man/systemd.service.xml
index 2db146b..c77992d 100644
--- a/man/systemd.service.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.service.xml
@@ -427,7 +427,7 @@
<term><varname>Restart=</varname></term>
<listitem><para>Configures whether the
main service process shall be
- restarted when it exists. Takes one of
+ restarted when it exits. Takes one of
<option>no</option>,
<option>on-success</option>,
<option>on-failure</option>,
@@ -557,7 +557,7 @@
group and the control group continues
to exist after stop unless it is
empty. Defaults to
- <option>control-croup</option>.</para>
+ <option>control-group</option>.</para>
<para>Processes will first be
terminated via SIGTERM. If then after
@@ -597,7 +597,7 @@
<option>main</option> or
<option>all</option>. If
<option>none</option> no daemon status
- updates are accepted by the service
+ updates are accepted from the service
processes, all status update messages
are ignored. If <option>main</option>
only service updates sent from the
diff --git a/man/systemd.unit.xml b/man/systemd.unit.xml
index 4e1d9f3..34f4bab 100644
--- a/man/systemd.unit.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.unit.xml
@@ -602,7 +602,7 @@
must either be a single word, or an
assignment (i.e. two words, seperated
by the equality sign). In the former
- case the kernel command line is search
+ case the kernel command line is searched
for the word appearing as is, or as
left hand side of an assignment. In
the latter case the exact assignment
diff --git a/man/systemd.xml b/man/systemd.xml
index 6aa4f70..f434bfc 100644
--- a/man/systemd.xml
+++ b/man/systemd.xml
@@ -323,9 +323,9 @@
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.timer</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>Swap units are very similar to
- mount units and encapsulated memory swap
+ mount units and encapsulate memory swap
partitions or files of the operating
- systemd. They are described in
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.swap</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para></listitem>
+ system. They are described in
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.swap</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>Path units may be used
to activate other services when file system
@@ -336,7 +336,7 @@
<para>Units are named as their configuration
files. Some units have special semantics. A detailed
- list you may find in
+ list is available in
<citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd.special</refentrytitle><manvolnum>7</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
<para>systemd knows various kinds of dependencies,
@@ -361,7 +361,7 @@
this.</para>
<para>Application programs and units (via
- dependencies) may requests state changes of units. In
+ dependencies) may request state changes of units. In
systemd, these requests are encapsulated as 'jobs' and
maintained in a job queue. Jobs may succeed or can
fail, their execution is ordered based on the ordering
@@ -851,8 +851,8 @@
<listitem><para>Takes a boolean
argument. If <option>true</option>
systemd spawns a shell when it
- crashes. Otherwise no core dump is
- created. Defaults to
+ crashes. Otherwise no shell is
+ spawned. Defaults to
<option>false</option>, for security
reasons, as the shell is not protected
by any password
--
1.7.1
Andrew Edmunds
andrew.edmu...@yahoo.com.au
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