On Sun, 25.08.13 09:01, Jan Engelhardt (jeng...@inai.de) wrote: Thanks!
Applied! > This includes regularly-submitted corrections to comma setting and > orthographical mishaps that appeared in man/ in recent commits. > > In this particular commit: > - the usual comma fixes > - expand contractions (this is prose) > --- > man/journalctl.xml | 2 +- > man/sd_journal_get_cursor.xml | 2 +- > man/sd_journal_get_fd.xml | 14 +++++++------- > man/sd_notify.xml | 2 +- > man/shutdown.xml | 4 ++-- > man/systemd-backli...@.service.xml | 4 ++-- > man/systemd-cgls.xml | 2 +- > man/systemd-efi-boot-generator.xml | 4 ++-- > man/systemd-nspawn.xml | 2 +- > man/systemd.exec.xml | 9 ++++----- > man/systemd.journal-fields.xml | 2 +- > man/systemd.mount.xml | 2 +- > man/systemd.service.xml | 4 ++-- > man/systemd.special.xml | 2 +- > man/systemd.time.xml | 2 +- > man/systemd.xml | 2 +- > man/telinit.xml | 2 +- > man/timedatectl.xml | 2 +- > man/tmpfiles.d.xml | 12 ++++++------ > 19 files changed, 37 insertions(+), 38 deletions(-) > > diff --git a/man/journalctl.xml b/man/journalctl.xml > index 8680e53..e7097d6 100644 > --- a/man/journalctl.xml > +++ b/man/journalctl.xml > @@ -281,7 +281,7 @@ > > <option>short-monotonic</option> > </term> > <listitem> > - <para>is very similar > + <para>is very > similar, > but shows monotonic > timestamps instead of > wallclock timestamps. > diff --git a/man/sd_journal_get_cursor.xml b/man/sd_journal_get_cursor.xml > index 861927e..4cee7d5 100644 > --- a/man/sd_journal_get_cursor.xml > +++ b/man/sd_journal_get_cursor.xml > @@ -120,7 +120,7 @@ > returns 0 on success or a negative errno-style error > code. <function>sd_journal_test_cursor()</function> > returns positive if the current entry matches the > - specified cursor, 0 if it doesn't match the specified > + specified cursor, 0 if it does not match the specified > cursor or a negative errno-style error code on > failure.</para> > </refsect1> > diff --git a/man/sd_journal_get_fd.xml b/man/sd_journal_get_fd.xml > index 1c6f250..c4387b0 100644 > --- a/man/sd_journal_get_fd.xml > +++ b/man/sd_journal_get_fd.xml > @@ -232,15 +232,15 @@ else { > <constant>SD_JOURNAL_APPEND</constant> or > <constant>SD_JOURNAL_INVALIDATE</constant> on success or > a negative errno-style error code. If > - <constant>SD_JOURNAL_NOP</constant> is returned the > - journal didn't change since the last invocation. If > - <constant>SD_JOURNAL_APPEND</constant> is returned new > + <constant>SD_JOURNAL_NOP</constant> is returned, the > + journal did not change since the last invocation. If > + <constant>SD_JOURNAL_APPEND</constant> is returned, new > entries have been appended to the end of the > - journal. If <constant>SD_JOURNAL_INVALIDATE</constant> > + journal. If <constant>SD_JOURNAL_INVALIDATE</constant>, > journal files were added or removed (possibly due to > - rotation). In the latter event live-view UIs should > - probably refresh their entire display while in the > - case of <constant>SD_JOURNAL_APPEND</constant> it is > + rotation). In the latter event, live-view UIs should > + probably refresh their entire display, while in the > + case of <constant>SD_JOURNAL_APPEND</constant>, it is > sufficient to simply continue reading at the previous > end of the journal.</para> > </refsect1> > diff --git a/man/sd_notify.xml b/man/sd_notify.xml > index 7d96890..fc0f2f6 100644 > --- a/man/sd_notify.xml > +++ b/man/sd_notify.xml > @@ -200,7 +200,7 @@ > the status was sent these functions return with a > positive return value. In order to support both, init > systems that implement this scheme and those which > - don't, it is generally recommended to ignore the return > + do not, it is generally recommended to ignore the return > value of this call.</para> > </refsect1> > > diff --git a/man/shutdown.xml b/man/shutdown.xml > index af799c6..795fb66 100644 > --- a/man/shutdown.xml > +++ b/man/shutdown.xml > @@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ > <varlistentry> > <term><option>-k</option></term> > > - <listitem><para>Don't halt, power-off, > + <listitem><para>Do not halt, power-off, > reboot, just write wall > message.</para></listitem> > </varlistentry> > @@ -141,7 +141,7 @@ > <varlistentry> > <term><option>--no-wall</option></term> > > - <listitem><para>Don't send wall > + <listitem><para>Do not send wall > message before > halt, power-off, reboot.</para></listitem> > </varlistentry> > diff --git a/man/systemd-backli...@.service.xml > b/man/systemd-backli...@.service.xml > index f2f5472..2b73625 100644 > --- a/man/systemd-backli...@.service.xml > +++ b/man/systemd-backli...@.service.xml > @@ -57,9 +57,9 @@ > <para><filename>systemd-backlight@.service</filename> > is a service that restores the display backlight > brightness at early-boot and saves it at shutdown. On > - disk the backlight brightness is stored in > + disk, the backlight brightness is stored in > <filename>/var/lib/backlight/</filename>. Note that by > - default only firmware backlight devices are > + default, only firmware backlight devices are > saved/restored.</para> > </refsect1> > > diff --git a/man/systemd-cgls.xml b/man/systemd-cgls.xml > index 53e7f7d..2877f22 100644 > --- a/man/systemd-cgls.xml > +++ b/man/systemd-cgls.xml > @@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ > <varlistentry> > <term><option>--all</option></term> > > - <listitem><para>Don't hide empty > + <listitem><para>Do not hide empty > control groups in the > output.</para></listitem> > </varlistentry> > diff --git a/man/systemd-efi-boot-generator.xml > b/man/systemd-efi-boot-generator.xml > index 03a4fdd..3a79dfb 100644 > --- a/man/systemd-efi-boot-generator.xml > +++ b/man/systemd-efi-boot-generator.xml > @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ > > <para><filename>systemd-efi-boot-generator</filename> > is a generator that automatically creates mount and > - automount units for the EFI System Partition (ESP) > + automount units for the EFI System Partition (ESP), > mounting it to <filename>/boot</filename>. Note that > this generator will execute no operation on non-EFI > systems, on systems where the boot loader does not > @@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ > <filename>/boot</filename> is an explicitly configured > mount (for example, listed in > <citerefentry><refentrytitle>fstab</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>) > or where the <filename>/boot</filename> mount > point is non-empty. Since this generator creates an > - automount unit the mount will only be activated > + automount unit, the mount will only be activated > on-demand, when accessed.</para> > > <para><filename>systemd-efi-boot-generator</filename> > diff --git a/man/systemd-nspawn.xml b/man/systemd-nspawn.xml > index e55933d0..6264e48 100644 > --- a/man/systemd-nspawn.xml > +++ b/man/systemd-nspawn.xml > @@ -334,7 +334,7 @@ > <filename>/var/log/journal</filename> > exists, it will be bind mounted > into the container. If the > - subdirectory doesn't exist, no > + subdirectory does not exist, no > linking is performed. Effectively, > booting a container once with > <literal>guest</literal> or > diff --git a/man/systemd.exec.xml b/man/systemd.exec.xml > index b761832..2c673a2 100644 > --- a/man/systemd.exec.xml > +++ b/man/systemd.exec.xml > @@ -1,4 +1,3 @@ > -<?xml version='1.0'?> <!--*-nxml-*--> > <?xml-stylesheet type="text/xsl" > href="http://docbook.sourceforge.net/release/xsl/current/xhtml/docbook.xsl"?> > <!DOCTYPE refentry PUBLIC "-//OASIS//DTD DocBook XML V4.2//EN" > "http://www.oasis-open.org/docbook/xml/4.2/docbookx.dtd"> > @@ -327,8 +326,8 @@ > absolute filename or wildcard > expression, optionally prefixed with > <literal>-</literal>, which indicates > - that if the file does not exist it > - won't be read and no error or warning > + that if the file does not exist, it > + will not be read and no error or warning > message is logged. This option may be > specified more than once in which case > all specified files are read. If the > @@ -835,7 +834,7 @@ > <varname>InaccessibleDirectories=</varname> > may be prefixed with > <literal>-</literal>, in which case > - they will be ignored when they don't > + they will be ignored when they do not > exist.</para></listitem> > </varlistentry> > > @@ -972,7 +971,7 @@ > <function>sigreturn</function>, > <function>exit_group</function>, > <function>exit</function> system calls > - are implicitly whitelisted and don't > + are implicitly whitelisted and do not > need to be listed explicitly. This > option may be specified more than once > in which case the filter masks are > diff --git a/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml b/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml > index 452406c..cffcccb 100644 > --- a/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml > +++ b/man/systemd.journal-fields.xml > @@ -525,7 +525,7 @@ > > url="http://www.freedesktop.org/wiki/Software/systemd/json">Journal > JSON Format</ulink>, the addresses of journal entries > are serialized into fields prefixed with double > - underscores. Note that these aren't proper fields when > + underscores. Note that these are not proper fields when > stored in the journal but for addressing meta data of > entries. They cannot be written as part of structured > log entries via calls such as > diff --git a/man/systemd.mount.xml b/man/systemd.mount.xml > index 214f40c..9aac94e 100644 > --- a/man/systemd.mount.xml > +++ b/man/systemd.mount.xml > @@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ > using configuration not specified in > <filename>/etc/fstab</filename>; > > <citerefentry><refentrytitle>mount</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry> > - will refuse options that aren't listed in > + will refuse options that are not listed in > <filename>/etc/fstab</filename> if it is not run as > UID 0.</para> > > diff --git a/man/systemd.service.xml b/man/systemd.service.xml > index 238a49a..5df554c 100644 > --- a/man/systemd.service.xml > +++ b/man/systemd.service.xml > @@ -483,7 +483,7 @@ > was stopped. This includes cases where > the commands configured in > <varname>ExecStop=</varname> were used, > - where the service doesn't have any > + where the service does not have any > <varname>ExecStop=</varname> defined, or > where the service exited unexpectedly. This > argument takes multiple command lines, > @@ -823,7 +823,7 @@ > in other words: the > <varname>Service=</varname> setting of > <filename>.socket</filename> units > - doesn't have to match the inverse of > + does not have to match the inverse of > the <varname>Sockets=</varname> > setting of the > <filename>.service</filename> it > diff --git a/man/systemd.special.xml b/man/systemd.special.xml > index e1299ab..da29660 100644 > --- a/man/systemd.special.xml > +++ b/man/systemd.special.xml > @@ -448,7 +448,7 @@ > after it. Note that networking > daemons that simply provide > functionality to other hosts > - generally don't need to pull > + generally do not need to pull > this in.</para> > </listitem> > </varlistentry> > diff --git a/man/systemd.time.xml b/man/systemd.time.xml > index 4f6dd0f..3d13b57 100644 > --- a/man/systemd.time.xml > +++ b/man/systemd.time.xml > @@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ > but when the weekday is specified it must either be > in the abbreviated (<literal>Wed</literal>) or > non-abbreviated (<literal>Wednesday</literal>) English > - language form (case doesn't matter), and is not > + language form (case does not matter), and is not > subject to the locale choice of the user. Either the > date, or the time part may be omitted, in which case > the current date or 00:00:00, resp., is assumed. The > diff --git a/man/systemd.xml b/man/systemd.xml > index 9f58bc2..47d6438 100644 > --- a/man/systemd.xml > +++ b/man/systemd.xml > @@ -1022,7 +1022,7 @@ > option prefixed with > <literal>rd.</literal> is honored > only in the initial RAM disk (initrd), > - while the one that isn't prefixed only > + while the one that is not prefixed only > in the main system.</para></listitem> > </varlistentry> > > diff --git a/man/telinit.xml b/man/telinit.xml > index 4c6064f..bb80939 100644 > --- a/man/telinit.xml > +++ b/man/telinit.xml > @@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ > <varlistentry> > <term><option>--no-wall</option></term> > > - <listitem><para>Don't send wall > + <listitem><para>Do not send wall > message before > reboot/halt/power-off.</para></listitem> > </varlistentry> > diff --git a/man/timedatectl.xml b/man/timedatectl.xml > index 16ee3df..9aade29 100644 > --- a/man/timedatectl.xml > +++ b/man/timedatectl.xml > @@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ > <varlistentry> > > <term><option>--no-ask-password</option></term> > > - <listitem><para>Don't query the user > + <listitem><para>Do not query the user > for authentication for privileged > operations.</para></listitem> > </varlistentry> > diff --git a/man/tmpfiles.d.xml b/man/tmpfiles.d.xml > index 6a2193d..025c801 100644 > --- a/man/tmpfiles.d.xml > +++ b/man/tmpfiles.d.xml > @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ L /tmp/foobar - - - - > /dev/null</programlisting> > <variablelist> > <varlistentry> > <term><varname>f</varname></term> > - <listitem><para>Create a file if it > doesn't exist yet (optionally writing a short string into it, if the argument > parameter is passed)</para></listitem> > + <listitem><para>Create a file if it > does not exist yet (optionally writing a short string into it, if the > argument parameter is passed)</para></listitem> > </varlistentry> > > <varlistentry> > @@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ L /tmp/foobar - - - - > /dev/null</programlisting> > > <varlistentry> > <term><varname>d</varname></term> > - <listitem><para>Create a directory > if it doesn't exist yet</para></listitem> > + <listitem><para>Create a directory > if it does not exist yet</para></listitem> > </varlistentry> > > <varlistentry> > @@ -132,22 +132,22 @@ L /tmp/foobar - - - - > /dev/null</programlisting> > > <varlistentry> > <term><varname>p</varname></term> > - <listitem><para>Create a named pipe > (FIFO) if it doesn't exist yet</para></listitem> > + <listitem><para>Create a named pipe > (FIFO) if it does not exist yet</para></listitem> > </varlistentry> > > <varlistentry> > <term><varname>L</varname></term> > - <listitem><para>Create a symlink if > it doesn't exist yet</para></listitem> > + <listitem><para>Create a symlink if > it does not exist yet</para></listitem> > </varlistentry> > > <varlistentry> > <term><varname>c</varname></term> > - <listitem><para>Create a character > device node if it doesn't exist yet</para></listitem> > + <listitem><para>Create a character > device node if it does not exist yet</para></listitem> > </varlistentry> > > <varlistentry> > <term><varname>b</varname></term> > - <listitem><para>Create a block > device node if it doesn't exist yet</para></listitem> > + <listitem><para>Create a block > device node if it does not exist yet</para></listitem> > </varlistentry> > > <varlistentry> Lennart -- Lennart Poettering - Red Hat, Inc. _______________________________________________ systemd-devel mailing list systemd-devel@lists.freedesktop.org http://lists.freedesktop.org/mailman/listinfo/systemd-devel