On 04/10/2013 05:58 AM, intrigeri wrote: > Hi, > > kolohe wrote (06 Apr 2013 17:48:23 GMT) : >> I've (hopefully) made all of the recommended changes. This should read >> and look similar to the existing manual_usb_installation/linux.mdwn > >> https://github.com/kolohe/amnesia/blob/manual_usb_installation/mac/wiki/src/doc/first_steps/manual_usb_installation/mac.mdwn > >> Any reviews welcome! > > Here we go, then :) > Everything removed in this reply was changed.
> - The Markdown of the bullet list in step 4 is still buggy. I'm sorry > I should have made it clear that the single quotes I wrote against > every bullet point was here only to delimit what I was suggesting, > but should not have been pasted as is. I removed the single quotes. Is it working properly now? > - step 6 ("Reboot your Mac") seems awkward to me, as we just > redirected the user to the "start Tails" section on the download > page, so they're facing contradictory information at this point. > Perhaps the Mac-specific bits of step 6 should be integrated into > the download page's step 6 somehow? > I combined the Reboot your Mac and "start Tails" into the div class="next". Is that good? > Cheers, _______________________________________________ tails-dev mailing list tails-dev@boum.org https://mailman.boum.org/listinfo/tails-dev