Alexandros: > some days ago a friend contacted me as she was a bit confused with > torrent downloading section in https://tails.boum.org/download/index.en.html > > User was not able to fully understand the "Additionally, you can verify > the signature of the Torrent file itself before downloading it." > wondering how one can verify something before downloading it. > > Obviously the "it" refers to the "Torrent" in the previous sentence, > meaning the ISO and the sig. > > I know this is a tiny issue but maybe referring explicitly to the ISO > would help?
Definitely. "It" should be avoided as much as possible in technical documentation. Thanks for pointing that out. > diff --git a/wiki/src/download.html b/wiki/src/download.html > index 77426b3..d2c99e8 100644 > --- a/wiki/src/download.html > +++ b/wiki/src/download.html > @@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ share it without restriction.</strong> > > <p>Additionally, you can verify the <a href=[[!inline > pages="inc/stable_i386_torrent_sig_url" raw="yes"]]>signature of > - the Torrent file</a> itself before downloading it.</p> > + the Torrent file</a> itself before downloading the ISO.</p> I used "ISO image" which is more consistent with our terminology than "ISO" and less ambiguous than "content" (I think). If you're looking for more easy documentation tasks, I would suggest #6636 which is also OpenPGP oriented :) But I really don't mean to pressure you → https://labs.riseup.net/code/issues/6636 -- sajolida _______________________________________________ Tails-dev mailing list Tails-dev@boum.org https://mailman.boum.org/listinfo/tails-dev To unsubscribe from this list, send an empty email to tails-dev-unsubscr...@boum.org.
