Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-taps-transport-security-11: Yes
When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-taps-transport-security/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- As incoming AD I found that document really useful and informative - thank you. As a minor nit, I found the English around the usage of the term "Transport Services", that I wasn't familiar with prior to reading this document, slightly tricky to parse in the introduction, particularly because the term isn't defined until the Terminology in section 3. E.g. in the second paragraph it isn't clear to me what a "Transport Services system" real means. Possibly replace "a Transport Services system may need to support" with "a Transport Service may need to support"? Similarly, perhaps change " One of the goals of Transport Services is to define a common interface for using transport protocols" to " One of the goals of Transport Service definitions is to define a common interface for using transport protocols"? _______________________________________________ Taps mailing list [email protected] https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/taps
