The following errata report has been submitted for RFC9621,
"Architecture and Requirements for Transport Services".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid8889

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Ingbrigt Hovind <[email protected]>

Section: 4.

Original Text
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     +-----------------------------------------------------+
     |                    Application                      |
     +-+----------------+------^-------+--------^----------+
       |                |      |       |        |
     pre-               |     data     |      events
     establishment      |   transfer   |        |
       |        establishment  |   termination  |
       |                |      |       |        |
       |             +--v------v-------v+       |
     +-v-------------+   Connection(s)  +-------+----------+
     |  Transport    +--------+---------+                  |
     |  Services              |                            |
     |  API                   |  +-------------+           |
     +------------------------+--+  Framer(s)  |-----------+
                              |  +-------------+
     +------------------------|----------------------------+
     |  Transport             |                            |
     |  System                |        +-----------------+ |
     |  Implementation        |        |     Cached      | |
     |                        |        |      State      | |
     |  (Candidate Gathering) |        +-----------------+ |
     |                        |                            |
     |  (Candidate Racing)    |        +-----------------+ |
     |                        |        |     System      | |
     |                        |        |     Policy      | |
     |             +----------v-----+  +-----------------+ |
     |             |    Protocol    |                      |
     +-------------+    Stack(s)    +----------------------+
                   +-------+--------+
                           V
   +-----------------------------------------------------+
   |               Network-Layer Interface               |
   +-----------------------------------------------------+

Corrected Text
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     +-----------------------------------------------------+
     |                    Application                      |
     +-+----------------+------^-------+--------^----------+
       |                |      |       |        |
     pre-               |     data     |      events
     establishment      |   transfer   |        |
       |        establishment  |   termination  |
       |                |      |       |        |
       |             +--v------v-------v+       |
     +-v-------------+   Connection(s)  +-------+----------+
     |  Transport    +--------+---------+                  |
     |  Services              |                            |
     |  API                   |  +-------------+           |
     +------------------------+--+  Framer(s)  |-----------+
                              |  +-------------+
     +------------------------|----------------------------+
     |  Transport             |                            |
     |  Services              |        +-----------------+ |
     |  Implementation        |        |     Cached      | |
     |                        |        |      State      | |
     |  (Candidate Gathering) |        +-----------------+ |
     |                        |                            |
     |  (Candidate Racing)    |        +-----------------+ |
     |                        |        |     System      | |
     |                        |        |     Policy      | |
     |             +----------v-----+  +-----------------+ |
     |             |    Protocol    |                      |
     +-------------+    Stack(s)    +----------------------+
                   +-------+--------+
                           V
   +-----------------------------------------------------+
   |               Network-Layer Interface               |
   +-----------------------------------------------------+

Notes
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In figure 3 the internal implementation is referred to as a "Transport System 
Implementation" instead of a "Transport Services Implementation" as in the rest 
of the document

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RFC9621 (draft-ietf-taps-arch-19)
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Title               : Architecture and Requirements for Transport Services
Publication Date    : January 2025
Author(s)           : T. Pauly, Ed., B. Trammell, Ed., A. Brunstrom, G. 
Fairhurst, C. S. Perkins
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Transport Services
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG

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