On Fri, Dec 21, 2012 at 06:04:47PM +0100, Martin Toft wrote:
> One typo and two style issues:
> 
> --- sndio.7.orig    2012-12-21 17:55:39.415008759 +0100
> +++ sndio.7 2012-12-21 18:01:20.607018154 +0100
> @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@
>  while doing all necessary conversions on the fly.
>  It can mix multiple streams or split the hardware into
>  multiple subdevices, to allow programs to use the hardware
> -concurently.
> +concurrently.

right

>  .Pp
>  Hardware MIDI ports correspond to serial connectors provided by the
>  .Xr midi 4
> @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@
>  Software MIDI thru boxes allow one application to send MIDI data to other
>  applications connected to the thru box (for instance a software sequencer
>  can send events to multiple software synthesizers).
> -There's no hardware involved: thru boxes are created by
> +There is no hardware involved: thru boxes are created by

i don;t see why this is an improvement. what's wrong with it?

>  .Xr sndiod 1 .
>  .Pp
>  Additionally,
> @@ -123,7 +123,7 @@
>  .Fl fM
>  option on the command line.
>  .It Pa option
> -Corresponds to the sub-device string registered using the
> +Corresponds to the subdevice string registered using the

well, the aucat/sndiod docs all use "sub-device" (for better or worse).
so it makes more sense to change the two examples of "subdevice".

>  .Fl s
>  option of
>  .Xr sndiod 1 .
> @@ -140,7 +140,7 @@
>  First audio device exposed by
>  .Xr sndiod 1 .
>  .It Pa snd/0.rear
> -Sub-device registered with
> +Subdevice registered with
>  .Fl s Fa rear .
>  .It Pa midithru/0
>  First MIDI thru box created with
>

i'll make these changes in a bit...

jmc

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