On Mon, Apr 20, 2015 at 07:35:58PM +0059, Jason McIntyre wrote:
> On Wed, Apr 15, 2015 at 05:13:13PM +0200, Vincent Gross wrote:
> > Hello,
> > 
> > iked.conf's man page is a bit fuzzy on how local and peer ip defaults
> > are set. This patch below attempts to fix that.
> > 
> > Also, can you take a look at my previous nat-on-ipsec-on-iked patchset ?
> > 
> > see http://marc.info/?l=openbsd-tech&m=142662971007779&w=2
> > 
> > Cheers,
> > 
> > 
> > Index: iked.conf.5
> > ===================================================================
> > RCS file: /cvs/src/sbin/iked/iked.conf.5,v
> > retrieving revision 1.38
> > diff -u -p -r1.38 iked.conf.5
> > --- iked.conf.5     28 Feb 2015 21:51:57 -0000      1.38
> > +++ iked.conf.5     15 Apr 2015 15:02:21 -0000
> > @@ -334,23 +334,21 @@ see the file
> >  .It Ic local Ar localip Ic peer Ar remote
> >  The
> >  .Ic local
> > -parameter specifies the address or FQDN of the local endpoint.
> > -Unless the gateway is multi-homed or uses address aliases,
> > -this option is generally not needed.
> > -.Pp
> > -The
> > +and
> >  .Ic peer
> > -parameter specifies the address or FQDN of the remote endpoint.
> > -For host-to-host connections where
> > +parameters specify the address or FQDN of the local and remote
> > +endpoints respectively.
> > +If neither are specified, their default values are equal to
> > +.Ar src
> > +and
> >  .Ar dst
> > -is identical to
> > -.Ar remote ,
> > -this option is generally not needed as it will be set to
> > -.Ar dst
> > -automatically.
> > -If it is not specified or if the keyword
> > -.Ar any
> > -is given, the default peer is used.
> > +for
> > +.Ar localip
> > +and
> > +.Ar remote
> > +respectively. When only one is specified, the other
> > +defaults to
> > +.Ar any .
> >  .It Xo
> >  .Ic ikesa
> >  .Ic auth Ar algorithm
> > 
> 
> if you can specify one and have the other default to "any", i agree we'd
> want to document it.
> 
> for the rest, the diff essentially removes the information about when
> these options might be useful and needed. i'm less sure about that.
> 
> i'd appreciate some feedback from a developer that the content is
> correct.
> 
> i'm less inclined to rearrange the page this way without good reason.
> 
> also note for future man diffs to start new sentences on new lines.
> 
> jmc

sorry, but i cannot get any feedback on this. i'm dropping it.
jmc

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