Hi
- Use "user's password" (instead of "users password") consistently
- Change "to be read something like" to "to something like"
- Change "Be sure reset" to "Be sure to reset" (I'm not sure if line
length is an issue here, so I deleted the arguably superfluous "back"
from "reset these vales back", in case it is)
Following is a patch for etc.amd64/login.conf against -current. If/when
there is agreement on the proposed changes, I will send patches for
other archs.
Index: login.conf
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RCS file: /cvs/src/etc/etc.amd64/login.conf,v
retrieving revision 1.10
diff -u -p -r1.10 login.conf
--- login.conf 2 May 2019 08:35:10 -0000 1.10
+++ login.conf 31 May 2019 21:18:56 -0000
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
# Standard authentication styles:
#
# passwd Use only the local password file
-# chpass Do not authenticate, but change users password (change
+# chpass Do not authenticate, but change user's password (change
# the YP password if the user has one, else change the
# local password)
# lchpass Do not login; change user's local password instead
@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ auth-ftp-defaults:auth-ftp=passwd:
# The default values
# To alter the default authentication types change the line:
# :tc=auth-defaults:\
-# to be read something like: (enables passwd, "myauth", and activ)
+# to something like: (enables passwd, "myauth", and activ)
# :auth=passwd,myauth,activ:\
# Any value changed in the daemon class should be reset in default
# class.
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@ default:\
#
# Settings used by /etc/rc and root
# This must be set properly for daemons started as root by inetd as well.
-# Be sure reset these values back to system defaults in the default class!
+# Be sure to reset these values to system defaults in the default class!
#
daemon:\
:ignorenologin:\
