Not to provoke a deep philosophical debate about the difference between
Ql, Cm, and Sy, but surely Em isn't the best choice here. A couple other
nits that bothered me in the same general region, I guess your taste
might vary.

Evan Silberman

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commit 233b62ce4e6cd3388e68f407e50758111b3eeffc (ifconfig.8)
from: Evan Silberman <e...@jklol.net>
date: Sat Aug 22 21:14:25 2020 UTC
 
 Improve markup and punctuation concerning groups
 
 - They're groups, not scare-quotes-"groups"
 - The markup for the default groups is debatable, but Cm seems closest.
   You might also like: Ql, Sy
 - Parenthesized plural(s) is (are) distracting
 
diff cb34809c69289319bd78d14b4f5ed7d4e93b080f 
c3c1549c9f1e94ec03820de542eaf10eaf0dc3f0
blob - 9e6ad912b385de338033598de04f0184d015224e
blob + 968886c1a6d4849c4362ab2d759cc72c71d125ed
--- sbin/ifconfig/ifconfig.8
+++ sbin/ifconfig/ifconfig.8
@@ -238,8 +238,8 @@ transmit messages through that interface.
 If possible, the interface will be reset to disable reception as well.
 This action automatically disables routes using the interface.
 .It Cm group Ar group-name
-Assign the interface to a
-.Dq group .
+Assign the interface to a group.
+The
 .Ar group-name
 may not be longer than 15 characters and must not end with a digit.
 Any interface can be in multiple groups.
@@ -254,36 +254,35 @@ Some interfaces belong to specific groups by default:
 .Bl -dash -width Ds -compact
 .It
 All interfaces are members of the
-.Em all
+.Cm all
 interface group.
 .It
 Cloned interfaces are members of their interface family group.
 For example, a PPP interface such as
-.Em ppp0
+.Ql ppp0
 is a member of the
-.Em ppp
+.Cm ppp
 interface family group.
 .It
 .Xr pppx 4
 interfaces are members of the
-.Em pppx
+.Cm pppx
 interface group.
 .It
-The interface(s) the default route(s) point to are members of the
-.Em egress
+The interfaces the default routes point to are members of the
+.Cm egress
 interface group.
 .It
 IEEE 802.11 wireless interfaces are members of the
-.Em wlan
+.Cm wlan
 interface group.
 .It
 Any interfaces used for network booting are members of the
-.Em netboot
+.Cm netboot
 interface group.
 .El
 .It Cm -group Ar group-name
-Remove the interface from the given
-.Dq group .
+Remove the interface from the given group.
 .It Cm hwfeatures
 Display the interface hardware features:
 .Pp

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