On Fri, Jan 20, 2023 at 12:35:05PM +0000, Klemens Nanni wrote:
> 19.01.2023 19:11, Jason McIntyre ??????????:
> > On Thu, Jan 19, 2023 at 06:50:14PM +0000, Klemens Nanni wrote:
> >>    $ man -h rdsetroot
> >>    rdsetroot [-dx] kernel [disk.fs]
> >> vs.
> >>    $ rdsetroot
> >>    usage: rdsetroot [-dx] bsd [fs]
> >>
> > 
> > i have to say i think the man page has better argument names, but i've
> > nothing against your changes. just as long as they match.
> 
> Either way is fine, just let them match.
> 
> >> Clarify that -x uses stdout (could be a default file like ktrace(1) does)
> >> and switch 'standard in/output' to more common '.Va stdin/out' like the
> >> related vnconfig(8) does.
> >>
> > 
> > i'm fine with your diff, but i think that "reads from standard input" is
> > much easier to understand than the change you propose.
> 
> Sure, new version with both points incorporated.
> 
> Feedback? OK?
> 
> > 
> > jmc
> > 
> >> Explaining how disk images can round trip through rdsetroot and vnconfig
> >> is vaguely useful, imho, even less so in the description of -x, so briefly
> >> mention the relation and let readers follow the reference for more.
> 
> 
> Index: rdsetroot.8
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /cvs/src/usr.sbin/rdsetroot/rdsetroot.8,v
> retrieving revision 1.2
> diff -u -p -r1.2 rdsetroot.8
> --- rdsetroot.8       5 Apr 2019 21:44:32 -0000       1.2
> +++ rdsetroot.8       20 Jan 2023 12:33:31 -0000
> @@ -24,30 +24,29 @@
>  .Nm rdsetroot
>  .Op Fl dx
>  .Ar kernel
> -.Op Ar disk.fs
> +.Op Ar disk

well, disk.fs and your original proposal (fs) both hinted that you want
a filesystem. i'm less sure about "disk". you aren;t concerned about
that? i really don;t see an issue with how it is now.

>  .Sh DESCRIPTION
>  The
>  .Nm
> -utility inserts the file
> -.Ar disk.fs
> -into the reserved space inside a RAMDISK kernel.
> +utility inserts the disk image
> +.Ar disk
> +into the reserved space inside the RAMDISK kernel
> +.Ar bsd .

if you stick with "kernel" you'll need to make that change here too.

jmc

>  If
> -.Ar disk.fs
> -is not specified,
> -.Nm
> -reads from standard input.
> +.Ar disk
> +is not specified, standard input is used.
> +Disk images can be used with
> +.Xr vnconfig 8 .
>  .Pp
>  The options are as follows:
>  .Bl -tag -width Ds
>  .It Fl d
>  Debug.
>  .It Fl x
> -Rather than inserting, extract the
> -.Ar disk.fs
> -image.
> -The disk can be made accessible using
> -.Xr vnconfig 8 ,
> -filesystems can be manipulated, and finally re-inserted into the RAMDISK 
> kernel.
> +Extract the disk image.
> +If
> +.Ar disk
> +is not specified, standard output is used.
>  .El
>  .Sh SEE ALSO
>  .Xr config 8 ,
> Index: rdsetroot.c
> ===================================================================
> RCS file: /cvs/src/usr.sbin/rdsetroot/rdsetroot.c,v
> retrieving revision 1.3
> diff -u -p -r1.3 rdsetroot.c
> --- rdsetroot.c       24 Oct 2021 21:24:19 -0000      1.3
> +++ rdsetroot.c       20 Jan 2023 12:33:33 -0000
> @@ -294,6 +294,6 @@ usage(void)
>  {
>       extern char *__progname;
>  
> -     fprintf(stderr, "usage: %s [-dx] bsd [fs]\n", __progname);
> +     fprintf(stderr, "usage: %s [-dx] kernel [disk]\n", __progname);
>       exit(1);
>  }
> 

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