Hmm. I propose a rewrite (of the intro & game?):
You just finished reading the NSS News about cave exploring, also
known as "Flashlight Caving" and "Spelunking" by everyone but cavers.
After putting down the 'zine, you get this crazy idea to join a local
grotto and to explore some of the local caves in the area. This would
be your first awesome thing. An awesome thing that you will always
remember. The second awesome thing is that you read On Rope, which is
in part, about caving safety. You rock.
You join a beginner trip and almost get stuck in the birth canal of
Whirlpool, only to be coaxed out by your enthusiastic trip leaders.
You hear a rumbling sound from deep within, and as you exit up the
ladder, realize it's time for a beer. A Shiner, to be exact. You had
better ascend as quickly as possible to avoid the devastating force of
the rumbling stomach!
Oh yeah: and somewhere along the way, after returning home, you
realized you'd send in a comment to a silly spelunking iphone app, if
only you didn't have the BUY the &@*!&# thing to leave a comment!
On Feb 23, 2010, at 6:55 PM, Stefan Creaser wrote:
I'm surprised this line got past the "censors" ;-)
" You just recently finished reading a book about cave exploring, also
know as "Spelunking" by the pros."
Stefan
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From: Don Arburn [mailto:donarb...@mac.com]
Check out this application:
http://itunes.apple.com/us/app/cave-spelunker/id323882959?mt=8
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