------- Forwarded Message Date: Mon, 21 Jan 2013 18:40:56 +0000 From: Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melni...@isode.com> To: apps-disc...@ietf.org, draft-laurie-pki-sunlight....@tools.ietf.org cc: i...@ietf.org Subject: [apps-discuss] APPSDIR review of draft-laurie-pki-sunlight-05
I have been selected as the Applications Area Directorate reviewer for this draft (for background on appsdir, please see http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/app/trac/wiki/ApplicationsAreaDirectorate). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-laurie-pki-sunlight-05 Title: Certificate Transparency Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov Review Date: 2013-01-21 IETF Last Call Date: 2013-01-24 IESG Telechat Date: unknown Summary: This draft is nearly ready for publication as an Experimental RFC. I think a revision should be able to address my issues (and issues raised by Eliot earlier). Major Issues: none Minor Issues: 1) There are no references for SHA-256/TLS/RSA in the document. They are Normative and should be added. 2) Section 4 needs references for JSON, base64 and HTTP. 3) Section 4.1: it would be good to have an example. 4) In 4.5/4.6: are indexes 0-based or 1-based? _______________________________________________ apps-discuss mailing list apps-disc...@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/apps-discuss ------- End of Forwarded Message _______________________________________________ therightkey mailing list therightkey@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/therightkey
