Some comments on this: Abstract:
Add a bracketed reference to IEEE 1588-2008 Section 1 s/defined to monitor, measure the performance/defined to monitor and measure the performance It is claimed that monitoring is not a supported function of this MIB but I have identified numerous versiables in the MIB which I would consider to be providing a monitoring function. If you need specific examples, let me know. Section 1.1 What in this MIB is profile dependent? I did not identify anything in my review. It would be desirable. if possible, to have a profile-independent MIB. TEXTUAL-CONVENTION general issues Consider alphabetizing ClockInstanceType TEXTUAL-CONVENTION definition Description requires elucidation or a reference. ClockProfileType TEXTUAL-CONVENTION definition Consider using and OUI instead of an enumeration. IEEE 1588-1588 requires an OUI be associated with each profile. OBJECT-TYPE general issues Consider being consistent about repeating TEXTUAL-CONVENTION descriptions, explicitly referencing them or assuming readers will track down the reference without reminder. ptpDomainClockPortsTotal OBJECT-TYPE I assume this is the number of ports for the managed PTP-capable system (i.e. a router or switch). Suggest adding "in the system" to the description to clarify scope of count. ptpbaseClockTimePropertiesDSTable OBJECT-TYPE s/clock Timeproperties Datasets for/clock time properties datasets for PtpbaseClockTransDefaultDSEntry SEQUENCE Use ClockDomainType textual convention instead of Integer32 for ptpbaseClockTransDefaultDSPrimaryDomain PtpbaseClockPortEntry SEQUENCE Change ptpbaseClockPortSyncOneStep to ptpbaseClockPortSyncTwoStep to match 1588 semantics for this boolean ptpbaseClockPortRunningEncapsulationType OBJECT-TYPE Needs a textual convention or description of allowed values and their meanings ptpbaseClockPortTransDSlogMinPdelayReqInt OBJECT-TYPE Change to ClockIntervalBase2 type Section 5 Copy-paste error: "creation and/or manipulation of tunnels" Section 6 To be added Kevin Gross +1-303-447-0517 Media Network Consultant AVA Networks - www.AVAnw.com <http://www.avanw.com/>, www.X192.org On Thu, Aug 2, 2012 at 12:58 PM, <[email protected]> wrote: > > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts > directories. > This draft is a work item of the Timing over IP Connection and Transfer > of Clock Working Group of the IETF. > > Title : Precision Time Protocol Version 2 (PTPv2) > Management Information Base > Author(s) : Vinay Shankarkumar > Laurent Montini > Tim Frost > Greg Dowd > Filename : draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-03.txt > Pages : 65 > Date : 2012-07-31 > > Abstract: > This memo defines a portion of the Management Information Base (MIB) > for use with network management protocols in TCP/IP-based internets. > In particular, it defines objects for managing networks using > Precision Time Protocol. > > This memo specifies a MIB module in a manner that is both compliant > to the SNMPv2 SMI, and semantically identical to the peer SNMPv1 > definitions. > > > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib > > There's also a htmlized version available at: > http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-03 > > A diff from the previous version is available at: > http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-tictoc-ptp-mib-03 > > > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ > > _______________________________________________ > TICTOC mailing list > [email protected] > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/tictoc >
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