> On Mar 21, 2017, at 21:22, Melinda Shore <melinda.sh...@nomountain.net> wrote: > > On 3/21/17 4:20 PM, Eric Rescorla wrote: >> >> EDITORIAL >> You should replace "client hello" with ClientHello throughout. > > Thanks, EKR. I've updated the draft based on these comments and > will submit it once submissions reopen.
Minor nits from me too: 0) s1 (just once): r/server hello/ServerHello 1) s3.3: Is the or X.509 containers in the following supposed to be like otherwise known as X.509; it’s just that “PKIX” kind of jumped out at me: is not limited to public keys encapsulated in PKIX or X.509 containers 2) s3.4: Should we refer to SNI Extensions as “server_name” extension to match the registered value? You refer to this extensions as dnssec_chain in previous sections (just trying to be all matchy-matchy). spt _______________________________________________ TLS mailing list TLS@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/tls
