The Abstract begins "A format that supports the logging information about the 
secrets used in a TLS connection is described." I was suggesting that this 
should read either "A format that supports logging information about the 
secrets used in a TLS connection is described." or "A format that supports the 
logging of information about the secrets used in a TLS connection is described."

Yes, all nits, as I said. The PR looks good.
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From: Martin Thomson <[email protected]>
Sent: Wednesday, June 4, 2025 8:45 PM
To: Mike Bishop <[email protected]>; The IESG <[email protected]>
Cc: [email protected] <[email protected]>; 
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Subject: Re: Mike Bishop's Yes on draft-ietf-tls-keylogfile-04: (with COMMENT)

Thanks Mike,

On Thu, Jun 5, 2025, at 05:39, Mike Bishop via Datatracker wrote:
> Mike Bishop has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-tls-keylogfile-04: Yes

See https://github.com/tlswg/sslkeylogfile/pull/31

I couldn't find the abstract text you quoted, but the rest saved the RFC editor 
some work, I suspect.
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