Thanks for the input!

>  - hub.commit() is left as a little bit of unexplained black magic. You
>  might want to consider explaining in a sentence or two what the hub is.
>  I didn't find it incredibly obvious from looking at the other TG docs
>  so a mention here might be helpful.

Done!

>  - l1 is not a great variable name ;) I can imagine someone somewhere
>  scratching their head because they typed the wrong thing. Maybe list1
>  would be better as it's more obvious what it represents. The same
>  happens later with "for l in user.lists" which may look like "for 1 in
>  user.lists" in some typefaces and confuse unwary programmers new to
>  Python.

Yeah, coming up with ways to not shadow 'list' sucks. I changed it to
theList or userList where appropriate. (If you can think of better
names let me know.)

>  - I was under the impression that "raise
>  cherrypy.HTTPRedirect('index')" was superceded by
>  "turbogears.redirect('index')" from 0.9 onwards, though I am not too
>  familiar with 0.9 and there may be subtle differences I don't know
>  about?

That's news to me. I changed it.

>  - In parts of the tutorial where source is repeated from above, would
>  it be possible to shade the new lines differently to highlight what is
>  added at each stage?

I wanted that too, but I don't think there is a way to do it with
reStructuredText. If someone knows otherwise, let me know. I tweak the
text source often so I don't want to have to go and modify the HTML
every time...

--
Brian Beck
Adventurer of the First Order


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